Get both. I honestly can't decide between them. D:
I thought it was beautifully written and would do well just left as it is. It feels like a snapshot of grief, a small insight into a desperate life, and I think I prefer it like that rather than an extended story. I really liked the bit with the dust motes; to get caught up as if they were dancing together almost sounded wonderful.
Were you at all concerned at the fact Forsaken and I were watching you naked? :v
I am actually online but still in bed so no tape please D: I wish you were on msn, I totally miss you .-. I'm really thirsty so a delicious...
My dearest friend plums I've got flu; if only I Could talk to you ;-; seriously I barely just rolled out of bed and its horrible ;-; I can't stop...
I wish you'd given us a reason, something to justify the absence of somebody so wonderful. <3
My sister wanted to go to the polling station dressed as a KKK member and vote BNP.
Maybe it just hit Wales or something because I'm suddenly seeing it everywhere xD
Come on now, being melodramatic will only make you more socially unacceptable. Don't let people get to you so much. And if they do, put on a brave face. I said this elsewhere earlier: The minute you let it get under your skin, they've won.
Its funny ever since you told me why you were originally called Famous I've been seeing the brand everywhere o:
Mike, go on back and read rvr's post, that is what you need to listen to.
Britney derailed?-*shot*
sure sure, we all know about your underground activities now. >_>
this actually scares the hell outta me D: Spoiler
I can post pictures of myself wherever I want kthx D:
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That cat. Has. A 'stache. <3
...lovely :v
Ilu <3333333
I really love this, like wow, omg, it's just amazing. xD The poem is so playful and the format used just right. Your placement of punctuation is perfect and it really does read like a lighthearted diary entry. I really love it. <3 Also awesome thread title. :b