then thanks for chosing to be nice to me XD
9/10 i was thinking more along the lines of 5/10 but thanks!
its in the creativity corner and considering im no poet and as i said on the thread i never read it through b4 posting it its pretty good
and sorry i could care less about my grammer XD
yes i didnt expect any positive remarks on my spelling/grammer any way so oh well XD
would you like to see a poem i wrote?
i wrote this at two in the moning without thinking about it and have not truthfully read it untill no so im suprised its any good at all. day to night The day is hot and feels of fire but it is not the day that I desire for no heat can warm the soul but simply scorch an empty hole, of life or death then life again I'd give mine to other men for if I cannot see your face then better off not waste your grace, now its not long until the end and maybe I've still life to spend but not on me my life is spent, if the breeze does pull to rest then gladly I would face its breath for when the day ends so fast I'll be gone and you'll have night at last
ive no idea what anyones talkin bout so 23
what the hay i'll say 66
yeah im know im just annoyed cause her writings no better then rowlings but because of fangirls its a "masterpiece"
yes because youve seen past mayers lies...edward is ugly and jacobs a twit.
as i said on my facebook "Michael Carpenteris annoyed with edward turning respectable girls into mindless fangirls!!!"
ive read the book so im being fair in my accusations
what really gets me is the fact the story was fairly unoriginial and people (girls) no offence only read it cause they have a crush on either...
the book of course the ime of day itself is quite nice
i'm alright just annoyed to death of twilight.
hey heartless.!.!.!.
in that case 40