Tried my best on this, I'm under 13 so...I was too young to understand most of the questions....I need help.
Sweet! That means....I'm very close to your city!
This chapter was exciting, interesting and yet, good. Although I did find some spelling mistakes throughout the beggining and middle section of the chapter. But overall it was really good! I enjoyed on how to described things, which brought images to my head, knowing exactly what your were saying in your chapter. Keep up the good work!:)
Thankyou very much Xaale:)
Sweetness!~
Usually I don't talk in class becaused i'm shy and silent, but this year in Gr.7 I talked alot for one day...teacher told me to be quiet...yeap.
I live in Canada...somewhere in Ontario:)
Ehehe, thankyou Sasumi and Shades:) I really appreciate it. In two weeks or maybe August, I shall begin the project KHCtE ( setting everything up for this at the moment) Although, starting Sunday I will pm everybody if they'd like to continue and also if they do I shall ask for some information. Me and Rexmildd15 are in progress, taking the time to think up ideas and the rising actions along with the climax. Giving out a tiny hint..or i guess huge hint. Gummi's, worlds, new worlds, tag teams. But when I type a new chapter, I will put all your characters in groups, to keep track. Groups will be posted up in my new thread which is coming in week 3.
Quite not sure... because not sure whom had said this earlier where ever I was but, it was said we were to die, for Earth to fail last year or...not what year but the past.
Very creative in this chapter. ( I should've posted earlier) The paragraphs were very well done. Keep up the good work:)
That was shweet:D Really liked it, favourites.
I'm still continuing the story, but I thought I should add an epilouge. It was in one of my folders in my room. It is short but it's worth it. I hope you like the epilouge. Kingdom Hearts Comes to Earth Epilouge The night was dark, never before has it been a black night. Clock's of shoes clattered on the hard cement floor. "I really enjoyed that world. Earth. Is it?" Her assistence creeped over to the corner looking at her wild face. " W-What are you going to do?" he nervously asked. She looked over and gave an evil smile. She then looked over to the window with a suprising gasp. A bunch of lights, gathered. Throwing itself down, flashing quick like a meteor. Was it- " Shooting stars!" her eyes widened, she then glanced over to her assistence with a grin. Her wrinkles were visible, what was she planning to do. Wish for something bad or- "I wish for... Kingdom Hearts, Comes to Earth." She turned over, looking at the dog. " Pete, I hope you enjoy going on a trip to Earth. We're back in business." Pete perked up, straightening his back and then nodded to her response. " I won't let you down, Maleficant!" Pete nodded once more running off towards the door. Opening the big wooden door. "I'll start the Gummi!" he ran off, giving his respect with a salut. Maleficant laughed, and swished her cape back. "Mexony, we all know you wished for this. Don't be ashamed..." she weakly glared. Walking over she went to her computer scanner. Looking to the screen of the main population, the population of each world was decreasing. Her wish. It worked, and responded quickly. "It's working." she took hold of her staff. With a wide grin, she walked off, heading out the door. Who knew what she was up to.
GentleRain ( I think...) Most talkative (not sure if it was there already)....
Kh1- 46 kh2- 94
Yeah I know... I got some of it right...I just got the ranoid part wrong I think...
A wonderful chapter indeed, I really liked how you described, also made me laugh:) This is a very good chapter, keep up the good work, Shades! :)
Muxene, hasn't been on for a very long time..I last saw her when she joined.
Ah no, I blew my chance! But I'll just stick as a child whom writes and types (that ryhmed)
I forgot how to spell but. Darkranoid (think that's how you spell it) Nice blue colour.... good person... nice avi, really good at tips thingys.:)
Outdoor person or Indoor? (not sure if question has been asked already)
