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  1. demonchick25
    thanx for all the feedback. I do make a lot of mistakes I guess XD

    the only reason that I have huge chunks of dialogue is because it was originally written for an assignment about dialogue :/
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 27, 2009 in forum: Archives
  2. demonchick25
    Hello people
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 26, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
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    The Fearless Hunter

    Rockin' Out

    Awaken

    Ultimate Power

    Brother...Brother

    CnC please :3 all characters are mine X3
    Thread by: demonchick25, Nov 26, 2009, 0 replies, in forum: Arts & Graphics
  4. demonchick25
    SLIGHT SHONEN-AI WARNING.

    "Ash! You can't do this!" Shannon shouted, chasing after her brother. Her blond hair trailed behind her.
    "This is not your problem!" Ashton roared, causing Shannon to hesitate for a moment.
    "You'll never be happy this way anyway!" Shannon would do anything to stop him now.
    "I am happy. You don't get to decide that anyway! End of story!" Ashton left the room and headed for the door. He didn't have to listen to her anyway.

    He raced out the door, knowing he was running late. He couldn't believe how long he was fighting with her. It's been two month since this started, and she hasn't let up one bit. If anything she's gotten worse. He sighed, rounding the corner.

    His feet fell heavy on the sidewalk as he ran. The cool air rushed at his face hitting him like blades cutting his skin. He never slowed down though. RING…..RING RING RING……RING! He slowed to a walk, pulling his phone out of his pocket. He looked at the caller ID, seeing Mitsu's name.
    "Hey. I'm on my way now." He answered.
    "Oh, alright. Don't worry about that though." Mitsu started. "I'm just really worried about the whole Shannon thing." His muffled voice came through the speaker.
    "Don't be. She'll have to stop at some point.
    "But I just feel so bad. I hate having a friend mad at me."
    "It's not your fault she can't accept it."
    "I still feel bad about that other thing though."
    "You mean when you punched her in the face?"
    "Yes that."
    "I'll admit that was a bit extreme." Ashton started to pick up his pace again as he rounded another corner. "Well, I'm almost there, see you in a few."
    "Bye." Mitsu hung up the phone first.

    Ashton found his destination. The windows near the kitchen were open, letting the smell of beef stew drift out into the wind. He smiled having a good feeling about how the rest of the day would go.
    "Hey, I'm here." Ashton knocked on the door.
    "Come in." Mitsu called from the kitchen. "Get into another fight with her?"
    "Yeah, the usual." The warm air rushed at Ashton as he opened the door.
    "It's getting worse, huh?" Mitsu sipped up some of the stew. "Hm. Taste this."
    "We gotta do something about this." He took the spoon, taking a taste. "A little too thick, I think."
    "What can we do?" Mitsu reached for the extra broth, knocking over some glasses. "Ah! Really?" He sighed.
    "What is wrong with you?" Ashton laughed sarcastically. "I got that." He picked up the sharp glass, being careful not to cut himself. They stayed silent.
    "Hey Ash?" Mitsu started.
    "Yeah? What is it?" He dumped the glass into the garbage.
    "Was I so wrong?" Mitsu let the pot boil over as he looked over his shoulder. Ashton stared back at him.
    "I uh…" He didn't know how to respond. He'd never seen Mitsu so worried and upset. "I, I don't really think that's up to me." He walked over to him.
    "I feel like I've done something very wrong, but still I wouldn't want to change any of what I did." Mitsu shook his head and turned off the stove.
    "If there's anything I can do…" Ashton grabbed Mitsu's hand as it pulled away from the knob. He was shaking slightly. "I'll always be here." He held his hand tighter.

    It was quiet again. Mitsu couldn't bring himself to look up at Ashton's face. Tears started to blur his vision. They spilled from his eyes uncontrollably. He felt the warmth around his hand leave. As he brought his arm back, he felt Ashton's arms wrap around him. He began to sob into his shoulder. He couldn't stop.
    "I'm sorry." Mitsu was able to say between sobs. He repeated it again and again.
    "You have nothing to apologize for." Ashton rested his chin on top of Mitsu's head. "Everything's alright." He whispered, holding him tighter. Nothing else had to be said. They stood there for a while, just letting everything happen. They didn't care, as long as they were together.


    Feedback needed! written for my creative writing class.
    Thread by: demonchick25, Nov 26, 2009, 2 replies, in forum: Archives
  5. demonchick25
    haha XD

    one I took told me I was China :/
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 25, 2009 in forum: Social Groups (KH-Vids.Net Forum)
  6. demonchick25
    woot :O hey peoples :3
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 24, 2009 in forum: Social Groups (KH-Vids.Net Forum)
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    2
    it lives?
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 23, 2009 in forum: The Spam Zone
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  9. demonchick25
    A new sig. A little bigger than my usual but not by that much.

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    CnC and all that ;P
    Thread by: demonchick25, Nov 23, 2009, 0 replies, in forum: Arts & Graphics
  10. demonchick25
    *pokes you*
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 22, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
  11. demonchick25
    hello peoples :3
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 21, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
  12. demonchick25
    haha me too, I just don't own any XD
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 19, 2009 in forum: Forum Families
  13. demonchick25
    made a new sig after a while. CnC please :3

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    Thread by: demonchick25, Nov 17, 2009, 1 replies, in forum: Arts & Graphics
  14. demonchick25
    that's awesome X3
    Post by: demonchick25, Nov 15, 2009 in forum: Forum Families