Clicking the link made my laptop freeze. FML.
How do they define how long a paragraph has to be?
Get on msn sweetie [:
Got a bit bored. ~ Click Me ♥ Fullview please :3 Crappy scanner doesn't really pick up on shading. :l EDIT: Lolol, I swear, I didn't mean to make it seem like Tails was holding a keyblade.
I wish my history exam was multiple choice questions tbh. Mine consists of like 6 essay questions.
^ didn't get reference.
I actually really like James Blunt. .. I think I also harboured a secret childhood crush on him, I don't really remember.
... your brother's butt is responsible for seperating us? Lovely. ;-;
I actually thought your use of dialogue was excellent, especially using it to begin the chapter rather than using a bulk of description like many others do. There were no problems with flow, as far as I could tell. I really liked it, and you pushed character development just the right amount for a first chapter. At first I was a little irritated by the cliché highschool crush with Wyatt and Abbie but I'm sort of okay with it now. You also managed to inject some humor into your work, this made me laugh especially. xD The fact weird things are happening to J.C makes me wonder what kind of story this will become, but I really hope it doesn't become too supernatural or something because to me it seems like it might potentially ruin a great, realistic setting. Let's see where it ends up, though. xD
You already got 69, don't be greedy and ask for stick sucking too :l
I wrote two poems on a whim today, but I'm not particularly sure that I like either of them. :l We watched them from the prow Curved dorsal fins embracing the Atlantic In pairs, or threes, or more They swam in leaps, in bounds, with sounds Of glee and happiness. The click-click of shutters Broke the harmony of sky and sea. A mass of eager tourists Rushed to starboard In their own glee And received a diamond splashback. No, they didn't get their money back. The dolphins did depart, though As the sun had played her part And was turning the water to liquid fire. With solemn eyes I gaze Upon the moon O she doth hang Like a silver sickle in the sky Suspended by twilight And greeted by A blaze of curious stars Rebel diamonds from the sun They dance across the velvet night A waltz, a tap, a samba A ballet burning bright yeah the first one was my attempt at being playful.
Your name is Graeme Phillipson?
Me too, me too. Sometimes people think it's belly button fluff. ;l
If it was of the truffula variety, well duh. That pink, yellow, orange or purple fluff would make a wonderful bed to curl up in <3
those poor truffula trees D:
Happy biiiiiiiiiiirfday :3
"NOMINATE ME FOR ****ING EVERYTHING" You ****ed everything? D:
Omg, the Lorax x3 I still have that book~
MERGED. One thread per poet, as stated in the rules. If you want me to change the thread title to something more suitable (such as Xeitr's poetry) just go ahead and ask. As for your work: Your poems... don't really make any sense. I mean, sure- you can rhyme pretty well and you have an interesting vocabulary, but there was no way in which I could interpret your work. It seems as if you wrote down any old words as long as they seemed fancy and rhymed with the previous line. I think you really need to get back to the basics with poetry and think about the actual content of the poem before getting into rhyme, poetic devices and extended vocabulary.
How severe did they say your allergies are? If cats have never bothered you, there's no reason to get rid of them unless they're going to give you detrimental health effects.
