ZOMGWTFLOLZBBQVCR - HAX!!! D= *shot'd* X'D Anyways, it's not bad - not bad at all! =D However, I suggest typing it up on word first, then copying and pasting it on the site. I caught a few typos that normally wouldn't be there if it'd been looked up wid spellcheck. XD But, overall, good! GANZ toll! ^-^
I didn't really bother to look at it for a couple of reasons. =3=; One, You posted a poll to go with it, which is against the rules and has been for quite some time now (hence me voting "NEVER WRITE AGAIN!!!). Two, the title doesn't show much effort. People are pulled in by titles, so you should at LEAST try to make them seem intruging and unique, or else you'll never stand out in the crowd. Trust me - I know this from experience. And, three, while I was glancing through, I saw Sora's name. I never read things with Sora in them, cuz i hate him. XD but that's not your fault - there's a lot of people who DO like the little prick so it's not my audience. XD SO! There's two pieces of advice for ya. Brush up a little more, and I might come back to see what cha got. ;P
I said Xehanort, but he's got an unfair advantage over the others since he was only shown in a shmexy lab coat\tex of awsomenezz. ;~;
Xigbar looked around, gasping a little. "..." Suddenly, he popped Luxord a good one on the back of his neck, screaming, "Oh, nice JOB, idiot! NOW look what ya did?! We're gonna be completely lost!!! Where the hell ARE we, anyway?!"
I phail, then. D= *dies*
I like them both, but since Jerry only wants to get some cheese without Tom hounding (Lawlz... XD Tom... a cat... Hounding? =D; *brick't*) him all day, I voted for him. =D
Postage. XD Even though I'm not really a girl... <<>>;
(( Bow, chicka bow wow, chicka bow wow! XD )) Xigbar grinned, hugging the lil' Luxord and jumping to his feet. "KAY! Let's do it, to it, Luxxy!" he shouted. "HOO-RAY FOR CLEAN UNDIES!!!" (( Lawlz - suckage postage. XD ))
OMFG - liek, yay. D= *does that*
I am against gambling and therefor cannot enter the lottery, lolz. D= *shot'd for pointlessnezz*
Doode. Count me in. =D
"I dun wanna be big again..." Xigbar moaned, allowing Luxord to drag him away. "When you're a kid, you get away with a LOT more crud than if you're an adult...! And, sides, LOOK!" He flipped his hair, proudly. "No gray!"
"I'm NOT gonna cry, ******bag..." Xigbar grumbled, crossing his arms. "It just HURT, is all..." He was silent a while, then asked, "But... Who's gonna take us to the store, again...?"
Are you frickin' kidding me? XDDDD The first one's hilarious! XD How the heck did he do that? O.o;
First friend...? Hmmm.... I remember that... I started making friends when I joined the IABD rp... I'm pretty sure my first friend was Demyxu (aka Celeste). She doesn't come one anymore, and we don't talk much anymore, but... She's been a great friend, and I don't know where I'd be without her. With out Celeste, there'd be no stalker!Luxxy, or Xaldin with a personality - no scratch that. There'd be no fanfics PERIOD. I you BIG, Celeste... ;~; I hope we can be friends for many more years to come. ^-^ ..... wow - that was a lot. :sweatdrop:
Xigbar rolled with him, landing ungracefully on his face. Again. Xigbar groaned, rubbing his poor, sore face. "I haaaaaaaaate life..." he grumbled, sourly. Suddenly, the lights were blocked out by the towering Wave looming over them. Xigbar blinked, staring at lit. "Uh... Luxxy...?" he squeaked.
..... Ring Around the Roseys. Ka-chow. ;D
I had one yesterday. D=
Iunno... How long will it take him to recovery from liposuction, again? D=
Two words Spamzone, Idjut. XDDDDDD
