Killing whole family of person, telling that person how to play card games on motorcycles and leaving deck behind, telling that they should challenge me when they become stronger... oh wait you were asking about ridiculous. Then ridiculous means absurd.
On other note since you wanted to start RP and get some tips on T.G., so can I make it ridiculous or not?
Then why are you ignored again?
Again?
Actually he was referring to Fred cards.
Too weak. Suggested changes: 1st If you have Elemancer in deck 2nd If your opponent have cards in deck 3rd Pay 1 Life Point
Yes they are not terrible. I believe that soon there will be high chance that I will have nothing to get picky about. Between another series of your monsters there seem to be decreasing number of problems.
That works too.
Give unnerfed effect of Ancient Fairy Dragon and nerfed effect of Demise. For now its first effect won't matter that much. Well its not that bad. However you cannot get it out. 0/10 not usable. Again not that bad. Its stats are OK and effect is not something over the top. Again you cannot get it out. But wait! There is more: in matter of wording it should be face-down. Wait! Wait! WHY?! You were doing so good so WHY?! WHY DID YOU JOINED THEM?! THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS ATTACK MODE, GOD DAMN IT!!!!!!!! I say nerf it. Both it first effect and its effect when destroyed.[DOUBLEPOST=1421506838][/DOUBLEPOST] Erica is not that bad. I line her method of getting out token and cost of her protective ability. However on very minor problems: two t in targeted in last line. Ryu is low level Solar Fare Dragon with extra utility of getting out tokens. Nothing too fancy. I like it. This mental guy is pretty neat. Get some little burn, resurrect itself and burn more. I would add limitation on its resurrection ability. Maybe during the End Phase, maybe if you control Elemancer. Just so you cannot get it out over and over any time you want as long as you control tokens. Also its last protective ability is not that bad. On last note I think you have one extra unnecessary empty line at the bottom, but that's just graphic error.
Although it feels like another rip-off Cyber Dragon, its still a good card. I say its OK.
You can do what you can. As long as its reasonable from point of deck and game. As I said. As long it is reasonable its okay. It might be a case after we will get more support for them, but for now I would keep it just to add consistency it needs. If it will be just too strong you can just remove it (AKA no longer alive card). Also, because you seem to have worries about getting tokens too easy, I suggest adding "You can only activate "X" once per turn."[DOUBLEPOST=1421454471][/DOUBLEPOST] Spoiler No **** Sherlock. But you still didn't answered my question, so that helps nobody.
Card A: I think that correct form would be "You cannot Summon a monsters" Card B: One card to summon them all. I think it would be better if you would let your opponent choose one Attribute, except Divine, and you get to special summon 1 token of this Attribute. Then downside of being unable to normal summon would be unnecessary. Card A and B: It's just my personal thought that they both could get restriction to being able to be activated only while you control "Elemancer". Card C: Wait, what card C? There is non? Well then I guess I will think of one. "Activate only while you control "Elemancer" monster. Target 1 face-up monster your opponent control: Special Summon 1 "Elembroy Token" (Rock-type/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) (Its Attribute becomes the same as Attribute of targeted monster)."
Ladies and gentleman! We got lore for cards. Well as long as you cannot abuse her from anywhere I guess its fine that way. Ok, since now what you meant by continuous effect is clear. Unfortunatly I don't know to write it so its more clear, so I guess we need to deal with that. And BTW Excalibur could still run over that, but mostly in HC deck, rather than a splash able card. Well I get your point, and with ATK boost from only Effect monsters it seems OK. And as you might get from what I written, I must had misread part of it. Literately until you mentioned it again I thought it was protecting from all kinds of effects. On even more unrelated note: I have "winter break" now. And pizza I was excepting.[DOUBLEPOST=1421445012][/DOUBLEPOST] They do get something for free, but no more than 2 things at the same time. And some of yours do get more than one thing.
Even those have their limits. And you did broken them. Go to your Windows>Accessory>System Tools>Sign Table (or something like that, I translating it fast by myself, too lazy to look for literal translation) Or just go back a few pages and copy it from my post.
"Assassin Fiend" Either re-add Mariner condition for direct attacks or remove double damage part. "Malicious Heart" Remove part that negates flip effects and it will be okay. "Maelstorm" Good to go. "Blue Flameedge" Change Bladege to his evil counterpart. Rest is good to go.[DOUBLEPOST=1421442530][/DOUBLEPOST] Add bullet holes instead of 1. and 2. and its pretty much OK. Not much problems with that.[DOUBLEPOST=1421443233][/DOUBLEPOST] "Byoki" This one is, copy of banned card. No, bad Jaden. "Fukushu" OK. "Krieg" **** this guy. "What will happen if we slap Demise and halve of BLS on top of each other and leave it with no restrictions to summon?" "Mors" Brionac on steroids. No, bad Jaden, bad! "Sabeji" Would be good if it would only for battles with another monsters. "Vizer" OK. "Seifuku" Red Dragon Archfiend on steroids, lower its ATK and it won't be that bad.
Can I make it ridiculous?[DOUBLEPOST=1421433986][/DOUBLEPOST] And BTW I will go with male? Thoughts?
Whatever. BTW are you really looking for help with this archetype or you just want to make RP?
Your image broke. Again. What a surprise!
They are terrible. "Guardian Elemancer, Tsubasa" Stats: OK. Maybe due to effect I would nerf them a little. Effect: Its too protective without that much of a downside. It protects from both cards effects and attacks. Something you don't see very often in game (at least if we talk about well thought, balanced stuff; "looking at you Towers"). There is part that don't say from where you can summon it, so I will say no to this card just because you can abuse it from hand, graveyard and banished zone. Also I don't like that its not related to tokens in any way. I don't feel like Elemancer any more. And probably you just want to bounce cards back to hand to get additional tokens. Suggested Changes: Limiting its effect to special summon itself from hand only. Limiting its effect to protect to just destruction by battle or destruction by cards effects. Adding something to do with tokens (I suggest using them as cost for ability). "Soul Sealing Golemental" (Another mental golem ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) ) Stats: As for original stats there is nothing to say... Summoning Conditions: Except for fact that you forgot part of it, another one that requires DARK Token? Effect: Describe what you mean by continuous effect. Continuous Spell/Trap cards or just all effects that don't require manual activation? Also all face-up monsters are unaffected by your monsters effects, also your opponent monsters. Its attack boost at it full capability can reach 4500 ATK. It also gains ATK for every token. Surprisingly it have downside. Suggested Changes: Making clear what this card text means by continuous effect. Changing ATK boost effect (also it needs errata just for that part; it should be 300 ATK, same deal with other mental guy) so it gains boost just from Effect monsters (I just feel that it would fit it more). Also change it protective effect so it's not so overpowered, I suggest to make it so it protects them from destruction by card effects OR protects everybody except itself and other copies of it. Also on an unrelated note, next time, please give me text that is visible on card. It will be easier to deal with bigger number of cards. Or just arrange them so they are next to each other.
Did you know that friendship is magic? And that magic is heresy?
