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Axel's Good Deed's Chapter 5 Chapter 5 Axel woke up from another loud crash in the middle of the night, but this time, it came from the hallway. “Can’t I ever get some sleep? He said getting out of bed. He saw Marluxia sneaking into Vexen’s room and coming back out. “Marly! What are you doing?†Axel screamed while whispering. Marluxia jumped scared to death. “Nothing important, just go back to bed,†Marluxia suggested. “I can’t with you making all that noise,†Axel said while shutting the door. ---------------------The next Morning----------------------- Axel woke up, got dressed, and combed his hair. He walked down the stairway and into the kitchen. Marluxia was there. “What was that all about last night?†he asked Marluxia. “Oh… um…Axel, can I trust you?†Marluxia asked. “Sure, what is it?†asked Axel. “I am kind of in love with Vexen,†he said. Axel said, “Okay.†He got up from his seat. “I am going to walk away, and we will never speak of this again,†Axel said. “Please help me! You helped Roxas and Larxene!†Marluxia said. “Yeah, but they are the opposite sex though!†Axel said. “Please,†Marluxia said. “Alright, I’ll go talk to him,†Axel said. “Thanks,†Marluxia said. Axel walked up to Vexen’s room. “Hey Vexen, you’ve got a secret admirer,†Axel said. “Who?†asked Vexen. “Marluxia,†answered Vexen. Vexen started to smile. “Will you ask him to come up here, I got a surprise for him†asked Vexen. “Sure, but did you know it was him?†asked Axel. “No, but someone left me a note on my table wanting to meet me in here,†Vexen explained. “Okay,†Axel said while running down the stairs into the kitchen. Hey Marluxia, Vexen wants to meet you in his room,†Axel said. “Thanks a bunch!†yelled Marluxia as he ran up the stairs. Axel smiled. A few hours later he walked up the stairs, but he heard some noises coming from Vexen’s room. He stood next to the closed door to hear what is going on. "Mmm that’s so good," Vexen said. "Feels good too" he said again "Especially right there!" he yelled "What? Really? Let me try!" "Ya! Right there!" Vexen said again "Oww. stop yanking! It's not like it's all gone" Marly said "Ha-ha. Sorry. Mmm that's really good," Vexen said "GAH! Aww crap, it's dripping!" Marly said "Man sorry about that. You can't control it," Vexen said "It's okay, we can lick it up," Marly said "Oh good idea," Vexen said. "But not there! That tickles!" Marly said "WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON IN HERE?" Axel yelled He saw Vexen and Marly eating a salty sweet ice cream. "Uhh, you want one?" asked Vexen "Why the hell did I just think that?" Axel asked himself. I got the ending from here:
I'm really good with computors and I can even type without looking at the keyboard. I'm doing it right now! lol I'm half-way done... and It's Hilarious!
Axel's Good Deed Quiz...... Okay If you've been paying attention, I will ask you a question... What did Larxene say as an excuse to get out of the meeting? Hint: Chapter 1
okay.. The votes are in!!!!!! looks like Axel will help him by: DA DA DA DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!! ASKING OUT VEXEN! YAY!!!!!! (lol) I will try to post it withing the next 10-20 minutes but, Luxord is next. I already have an idea of him needing help with gambling. I need ideas! I'm the writer and your the reader.... I need your opinions!
That's really awesome!
Chapter 4 Axel woke up to the annoyance of Roxas. BOOM CRASH! BANG! “Roxas, what are you doing in my room?†Axel asked. Roxas jumped startled. “Sorry Axel. Did I wake you?†Roxas asked. “Yeah, and what are you doing in my room at 5:00am?†Axel asked. “I’m just… uhh…can I talk to you in the morning?†asked Roxas. “Sure, but let me get some sleep before I burn down the place sheesh!†Axel said while lying back down. ------------------------------Morning------------------------------- Axel walked downstairs in his nightclothes and without combing his hair. He met up with Roxas. “What do you want to talk about?†Axel asked Roxas. “Well…uhh...†Roxas started. “Come on spit it out,†Axel said. Roxas looked around and said, “Let’s go to my room. We will have more privacy there,†Roxas stated. Roxas and Axel walked upstairs. Larxene met them on the way up. Axel didn’t notice that Roxas was blushing. “Hey Axel, umm, can I talk to you?†Larxene asked. “After I talk to Roxas,†Axel replied. “Sure,†Larxene said. Axel and Roxas went into the room, and Roxas locked the door. “Wow, this must be one heck of a talk,†Axel said. “Axel… I’m…uhh…†Roxas stated. “Yes?†Axel asked. “I’m…uhh… I’m….in….love,†Roxas finally said. Axel had the most weirded out face he ever made and assumed Roxas was in love with him. “Umm…Roxas…Sorry, but I am not gay,†Axel stated. Roxas got his Keyblade and hit Axel in the head with it. “Not with you! Sheesh!†Roxas said. “Oww!†Axel screamed. “I’m in love with…. Uhh….Larxene,†he said softly. Roxas looked at Axel with a smile. “Tell her how you feel,†Axel told him. “Umm… I’m afraid to. If I do ask her out and be her boyfriend, what If want to break up with her? She has the power of lightning,†Roxas said. “Do you really love her?†Axel asked. “Yes, more than anything,†he replied. “Then why would you break up with her?†Axel asked. “I don’t think I would, but what If I would have to, I mean,†Roxas said. “Oh damnit, I forgot.†Axel said. “What?†Roxas asked. “Umm…she’s…uh…already dating someone.†Axel said. “Who is she dating?†Roxas asked. Axel looked at him in silence. “She’s dating Zexion,†Axel answered. “Damn him and his stupid good looks, but how could I not be adorable?†asked Roxas. Axel just sat there. “I’d rather not answer that,†Axel said. “Well, I got to go. Larxene needed to talk to me,†Axel said getting up and unlocking the door. “Thanks,†Roxas said. Axel walked out the door and into Larxene’s room. “Did you still want to talk to me?†Axel asked.’ “Yeah, shut the door and lock it,†she said while standing up off her bed, Axel turned around to shut and lock it, but when he turned around, Larxene kissed him… ON THE LIPS!!! Axel didn’t wan to be rude, so he gently pushed her off him. “Larxene, what was that?†Axel asked. “A kiss,†she said while blushing. “Why did you kiss me? I thought you were dating Zexion?†Axel asked. “I broke up with him this morning, because I want to be with you,†she answered. “Look Larxene, I’m flattered, but I don’t like you like that,†Axel explained. “But… I thought it was you who sent me those love notes,†Larxene said. “What love notes?†Axel asked. Larxene walked over to her dresser and pulled out a big stack of notes from a drawer. “These,†she answered. Axel picked one and read it. “How can I help it, if you’ve stolen my heart, if we were together, nothing could tear us apart, To the love of my life, and the beautiful girl, I‘ll love you for eternity, until we reach above,†the poem stated. “Do you love the person who wrote these to you?†Axel asked. “Yes. Now they’ve stolen MY heart,†Larxene said. “We have no hearts, but we can still fell them,†Axel said. Larxene nodded. “I recognize this handwriting. Roxas sent these to you,†Axel said. “Roxas is the one who stole my heart?†she asked while starting to blush. Axel nodded. “I’ll go tell him that you like him,†Axel said while unlocking the door. “Wait!†she yelled. She ran up to hug Axel. “Thanks Axel for everything,†she said. Axel put his arms around her. UH-OH!!!! Roxas walks in on both of them “Hey Axel, what did-†Roxas said while he caught them two hugging. “Axel! How could you do his to me? You know I love her!†Roxas yelled. “Uhh…. This isn’t what it looks like €¦. She was just thanking me for helping her find out who wrote the love notes,†Axel said. “Which was you,†Larxene said while walking up to Roxas. “You stole my heart, and in return, I’ll steal yours,†she said. Then Larxene kissed Roxas on the lips…. When Larxene stopped kissing him, Roxas asked, “But what about Zexion?†“I broke up with him just to be with you,†Larxene said. Roxas kissed her again. “All in a day’s work,†Axel said while smiling.
WHOO HOOOO! I LOVED this one. It's so unique and COOL! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was the COOLEST one I've seen! AHHH!!!!!!! lol He should be beaten up by xemnas! (not to be mean or anything. It just sounds intense if that happenes!)
Chapter 3 Axel was walking down the hallway and noticed Xigbar standing against the wall. With his head facing the floor “Yo Xigbar, why are you so down in the dumps?†Axel asked. “Just trying to remember,†he answered with his head still looking down towards the floor. “Remember what?†Axel asked “How I got this eye patch,†Xigbar answered. “You mean you don’t know?†Axel asked. “Nope. All I remember is when it happened. On my 16th year of birth,†Xigbar answered “How could you now know how it happened?†Axel asked. “I don’t have very fond memories. Any ways, is Demyx okay from last night?†Xigbar asked. “Yeah he is okay, but I want to know if YOU are okay?†Axel asked. Xigbar looked up at Axel and stood up. “I’ll be okay Axel. Now don’t you start going around here trying to find it out. I don’t want the whole organization finding out that I don’t even know how I got the eye patch. Ya hear?†asked Xigbar. But instead of answering, Axel walked away. “I swear that kid had the softest heart. Now look what it’s done to him,†Xigbar thought to him self. Axel walked into the library and saw Xemnas and Zexion. “Xemnas, have you apologized to Larxene yet?†Axel asked. “I took care of it. Are you happy now?†Xemnas asked. “I would be if I knew if you weren’t lying,†Axel stated. Xemnas sighed and said, “Yes, I did. I apologized to her,†he stated while walking out of the library. Axel walked over to the table Zexion was sitting at and took a seat next to him. “Hey Zexion, can you send me back in time for a few minutes?†Axel asked Zexion. “Are you crazy? If you alter one thing, you’ll change the time line!†Zexion yelled. “I’m willing to take that risk,†Axel stated. Zexion stared at him a few seconds and let out a big sigh. “What day do you need to go back to?†Zexion asked while turning the pages to his spell book. “Ummm, promise you won’t tell anyone about this?†Axel asked. “Are you kidding? If anyone found out, I’d be in trouble. I’m only letting you do this once. You have 5 minutes before I pull you back into this time period,†Zexion said. “I need to go to Xigbar’s 16th year of birth,†Axel replied. “Xigbar has had a lot of growth. Let Axel turn to the 16 year of birth!†Zexion said. A vortex opened. “You have 5 minutes until the portal closes. If it closes on you, you won’t be able to turn back to this time period. I’ll pull you out when I see you,†Zexion explained. Axel nodded and jumped in. Zexion yelled to him one last time, “Try not to screw up everyone’s lives!†The vortex landed him at a garden in the nighttime. Axel looked around for Xigbar but couldn’t find him. Axel ran don the garden trail to see a beast. The black beast surrounded a teenage boy. “Wait, that’s Braig!†Axel thought. (Xigbar was the Nobody of Braig if you didn’t know.) Axel ran off to try and knock down the beast but it turned and hit him 10 yards away. The black beast grabbed Braig and was getting ready to slash him “No!†yelled Axel. He ran up and knocked down the beast, catching Braig as he fell down. “You okay kid?†Axel asked. “Yeah, but what the hell is that thing?†he asked. Axel turned and slapped him in the back of the head *ouch* “Mind your language,†Axel said, “I don’t know what that is, but you got to be careful.†Axel ran up and tried to do an uppercut on the unknown beast but it turned and knocked him yet ANOTHER 10 yards away. It came over and grabbed Braig once again only this time, the beast held him higher in the air. “Let me down!†yelled Braig as he struggled, kicking his feet, and hitting the beast. “Don’t worry!†yelled Axel. Axel was getting ready to run back up but Zexion pulled him back into his time period. All Axel could see was Braig getting ready to be slashed. The darkness covered him and Zexion and all he heard was the terrible scream the Braig let out. Axel came out of the vortex and was very angry. “Wait, send me back!†pleaded Axel to Zexion. “Are you nuts? I watched you in there and I couldn’t let you alter history. If Xigbar was meant to have his eye fractured, then that was meant to happen.†Zexion explained. Axel fell to his knees. “I could’ve saved him!†he yelled. “He wasn’t meant to be saved,†Zexion said while sitting down. Axel got up and ran through the hallways looking for Xigbar. At the end of a hallway, he saw Xigbar looking out a window. Axel ran down to talk to him. “Hey Xigbar, I found out how you got your eye fractured!†Axel said gleefully. “I told you not to,†Xigbar said. “Yeah, but it turns out, you were in the garden, and a big black beast showed up. I could’ve saved you, but I couldn’t,†Axel said. “Wait, you were there?†he asked. “Yeah, Zexion crea me a time vortex to send me back to when it happened. Plus, don’t tell anyone that he did that for me,†Axel asked. “Okay but, I’m fine with this. I’ll be able to live like this. Thanks for your concern Axel,†Xigbar thanked. “What are friends for?†Axel asked putting his hand in between him and Xigbar. Xigbar high fived him…
HEY THERE EVERYONE! Just wanting to let you know that I'm online. I'm also close to posting the new Axels Good Deed's chapter! WHOO HOO!!!! YAY
Roxas (cause he's a cutie!)
I'm headed off to bed! I'll be back on around 10 or 11 am tomorrow and post the new, "Axel's good Deeds" chapter.. BYEZ!!!
http://www.kh-vids.net/showthread.php?t=9075 That's the url to the 2nd chapter