Okay this is my poem that I've written, so please review it and tell me you think! If I had wings, then I could fly to the heavens My dreams give me wings, and you should really see me fly In my dreams I’m a pretty angel, not an ugly fourteen-year-old If I had wings then I wouldn’t be here I’d be in a perfect paradise It would be so perfect that the rain is so soft when the droplets touch your skin My wings would be golden white, with rays of sunshine coming from them If I had wings, then I wouldn’t be me I’d be someone else, and not the soft spoken me Not the outgoing girl you all know Not the bright girl, always searching for new knowledge I’d be an angel, searching for the purest soul If I had wings, then I could fly to the heavens If I had wings, then I wouldn't be here If I had wings, then I wouldn't be me If I had wings, I would let them fly me around in my dreams If I had wings then no one would pick on me If I had wings
Ummm...Hi I'm new here. I enjoy writting peoms and having fun with my friends. (I'm friends with Rouge Angel!! *waves*) I'll share some of my peoms with y'all too if I can.
