ellow! i see we're under new management.... so how is every 1?
both are ok but with out sora there'd be no roxas...
what the-?when did it become a race?i also think that it's a style.but a race?
i want to be zexion and one of the video game designers
OOC:are we driving now?
OOC:thank u very much califa630. BIC:demyx woke up and out of place he asked no 1 in particulare,"are we there yet?" OOC:so where are we headed and if we'er already there where are we?and who's shereing the crap mobiled w/me?
OOC:WOOHOO!!!!DEMYX IN DA HOUSE!!!!! .........um where are we.....?sorry i wasn't here.....:O
zexion sat in the corner in all his emoness,'there's got to be a way out...'he thought despreatly
hhhmmm...can i be zexion? reason:i was forced here to have a "good time"
emos are ok, some of them want all the atention although they really dont deserve it (posers (cant stand them)) and some are pretty hot and nice!
im not sure,he could of at least let them put up a fight, now THAT would be enjoyable! :)
thanks 01_kairi and xroadtotohdawnx, i'll go back and fix thoes capitalization errors...
Tthis is my very first fanfic every so some good constructive critisism would help, thankyou :) It's writen in he said she said pov so you can guess who they are by the discription i give (i'll say who they are at the end) oh and it takes plase befor kh So with out ferther ado... Secret Admire He watched her from the coffee hop window as she walked down the streets in all her misunderstood beauty.She didn't notice him there, infact she didn't notice him at all eventhough she saw him every day.But he was ther trying to comprehened her strange characteristics.he had something to say to her but he knew that she was too good for him.He tryed seeing himself with her but the vission never quite fit.He even tryed to compare and contrast, but always came up with more contrat. It was starting to rain so she huried into the coffee shop for a warm shelter. She started up to the cashier serching for her walete but it came up empty.Fortunatly for her it was him. He'd already prepared her usual and plased it in frount of her. "It's on me" he said in a low voice as to not disrupt the peacfull suroundings of the coffee shop. "Thanks'she said with a smile.He liked it when she smiled, it was rare but when she did it was nice and he wanted to make her smile more. he sat down at a small table next to the window. The pail light of the sun through the storm clouds complemented her colorless complextion in his eyes.He acknoleged her every detail from her sun lit hair and curvy figure to her bloodless lips and emerald eyes.A cupple minutes passed had by and the rain let up a little.He watched her as she rushed down the wet streets before the rain started up again.Her departure didn't bother him that much for there always tomorrow... end chapter 1 well its short but its a start! :D it's clear that this was a complete waste of like 2 minutes of your life but thanks for your time! :D so if you'd be so nice as to a respons i'd be prety happy! :) and i'll be motivated to put up chapter 2
burnitup is off line...
sounds like something out of kingdom hearts...
true!so find something to live for and live for it before time's up!
death frees us from this never ending hell ride we call earth,so thnk of it this way, when we die we're free!
yes this world is one of the sadest,and it's getting wrost,any thing good happen today or did it all suck?
well then cry cuz sometimes crying helps.but if the situations too private the posting here isn't such a good idea...
well i dont think i'll ask why it's so wrong,unless you do want to talk,but if not you dot have to :)
