Damn you, resume

Gah I feel so unprofessional. Can anyone lend a hand? I need it. Doesn't need to be fancy or over the top.

This is what I have so far:


[Name]
[Address]
[Phone]
lyvazchu@gmail.com


PROFILE: Food Service Management
• Hard working and follows orders
•
Skills:

• NRA Customer Service Certificate
• ServSafe Safety and Sanitation Certificate
• Hospitable
• Proper Table Settings


WORK EXPERIENCE:
Los Angeles Mission College
13356 Eldridge Avenue Sylmar, CA 91342
(818) 364-0632
Date Started: September 2011
End Date: March 2012
Duties at Job: Managed cappuccino cart and salad/smoothie bar, restocked food items, prepped food, served customers, maintained a clean work station, washed dishes, worked the register.

Education:
Los Angeles Mission College:
13356 Eldridge Avenue Sylmar, CA 91342
(818) 364-0632
Culinary Arts
September 2009 - Present

High School Attended: John H. Francis Polytechnic High School
12431 Roscoe Blvd
Sun Valley, CA 91352
(818)394-3600
High School Diploma
Date Completed school: June 2009

References upon request

 

get a more professional e-mail. like one with your name. the one you have isn't terrible, but it still looks bad. but you're a high school student applying for what i'm assuming to be a minimum-wage job, so what you have is fine.

 

I really do not have anywhere else to make a new email but I will see what I can do.

I do not know whether it is in fact minimum wage. It is a busser position so probably but it is in a really expensive place.

 

then you're pretty good. it's a decent first resume by most standards.

 

This looks good, the former employment part is nicely done. You don't have to be fancy with resumes, the simpler the better sometimes. I don't think the email bit is anything to worry about, they'll be far more concerned with your history and work ethic.
I know your pain, I've been having to revise mine for the past few months. Applied all over the place recently, very annoying experience that takes allot of patience.

 

I don't have much experience but I hope I can get it ; ; I really need this job.

 

Hey ya more than me in the same type of environment, only place I ever worked at was a gun range. Doesn't equate well to getting cashier or other such jobs. Hope you get it, good luck~

 

Oh we I'm sorry to hear that. But you're younger and have more time dear haha. Thank you ever so much though.

 

You can still use GMail, just make a separate account for work related stuff. That is something you should do regardless of it being professional-looking.

 

Well, kind of forgot and... sent it already. ; ;