Actually, Thebby, since I posted that, things have gone up. I need to change my mood. It needs to be so-fuxing-happy-I'm-going-to-explode-and-destroy-the-whole-planet. It looks like I might get full intahrnet back. I made a thread earlier today in the spam zone explaining my situation, but oh wellz. I'm not expecting everyone to have seen it, that zone is crazy. Threads made every minute Its probly buried. I'll repost it in my update list, after I post the update saying I've updated this thread, later on tonight. O.o... I just gave away the surprise...
137.) Money are little diamond thingies, and they dun know how to speel mony, its munny.
I'll do that. But no one could ever get tired of the FF victory song. Duh duh duh duuuhnnuuuh tra la l- *kills self*
My second plan worked!!! Moozezhazezhah!!! (<-- there's a good evil laugh for u to adopt, CtR. Hey, where's your fan club thread? I never "officially" joined, but I've always thought u were cooler then anyone on here....) Anyway, yeah, we need something to happen to this site that is epic/traumatically dramatic. This place is actually getting slightly boring to me... I hate to say it, but its true. I was all excited when I was told I could have internet back for a bit, but now that I'm here... I dun know.
*pats head* Good idea, buddeh. *releases hold on firearm in jacket pocket* EDIT: My mom is about to make me go shopping with her... I dun like shopping trips with her, 'cuz they take [insert time period longer than 4 hours]. So, should I... A. Commit suicide. B. Cry like a *****, and go along anyway. C. Stay locked up in my room, and then have to put up with her beating on my door, window, and then getting my neighbor (he's a cop), to break my door down. D. Eat some Ramen Noodles.
No rush, - any good work of literature needs to be taken seriously, and methodically to bring out its full potential... Probably why there are so many people who don't like writing. But yeah, sorry for becoming ****... Yep, u did spell suddenly wrong. I added it to my "Corrections Report", like, seconds after emo pengwin noticed.
O.o o.o o.O ...Continue plz. I likey so far. Re-check your sentence structure, and I think I saw a spelling error.. Hold on, I'll edit this with what I had a prob. with. EDIT: "Whats your name, son," I know its small, but I have problems. Also, since this lil' intro is kinda small, even this tiny error looks big. Well, you'll need an apostrophe, so it'll be "What's your name, son," Another thing. I think you need a question mark instead of the comma after son. So, it'll look summat like this: "What's your name, son?". Hmm... Oh! Here's another wee little thing I found wrong. He smiled sadly. "I'm... It might be better if you take out the period, and put a comma. This will let peeps know that the person smiles sadly right before he says what he says. One last thing, (you must hate me by now): This isn't like, mandatory, but it'll make the reader's reading experience easier. Press the enter key every time the person speaking in the dialogue changes. Soo... CHAPTER 1 "Excuse me, Excuse me, MOVE!!!" With all of his might he shoved through the last of the crowd and lost his balance. He sat down hard on his butt. The grass was soft but it still hurt. He stood up and brushed himself off, glaring at the mass of people. He looked to be about 12 with raven black hair that hung to his jaw and silvery, hazel eyes. He wore a tan tunic and a grayish cloak fastened at the throat with light brown, leather boots. Taking a deep breath, he walked up to a table sort of thing and looked up. A man was standing at the podium, hands on it, craning his neck down to see him. "What's your name, son?" he asked. "K-Kelvin, sir. I'm here to join the mission." The man looked stunned, "Well, erm, I'm sorry but the youngest we take are 16 year olds," he said apologetically, smiling sadly, "I'm sure your family needs you." he suggested. Suddenly, Kelvin's face turned to stone, and his eyes were cold. "My family is dead." And with that, he turned and walked away. Like I said, all suggestions. I can't wait for the next part, this looks like it could be VERY good. Note: I underlined everything I changed.
I luv you even more now... Haven't laffed that hard in a while.
ROFLMFAOPMMFP.
Even I can answer that. Just watch: End of Ze World at funnyjunkdotcom. Sorry for advertisement. Sorry if u think I may have hijacked the thread, I just felt like throwing in something. A Q: What'cha fink 'bout them bathin' apes? (I hope no one else asked this already)
*Busts in with M16 in one hand, and a RoCkEt LaUnChEr in the other* FU******K J0000000 2 STEENKIN' BIIITCH!!!! *begins shooting wildly*
*Weeps uncontrollably*
1. Do you know who I am? 2a. (skip to b if you said no to #1) Did ya' miss me while I was gone? 2b. DO J00 like pie? 3. I'm bored... Have any suggestions as to what I should do? and... Could you make sure it isn't jumping off of a cliff? The last time someone told me to do it, I was in the hospital forever. But, I did miss a lot of school. There's a plus side to everything I guess. 4. ... I dun have an iPod... I use a PSP for my musical experiences, so I have no need for one.
Well, for those of you who know, my computer time was hacked to bits after my parents found out I was failing three classes (even though 2 of the classes are the same thing. I have Block scheduling, but one of those classes I have on both days. When they gave me the Progress Reports, the same class showed up on both days. So, it looked like I had 2 F's and a D+, when I really just had an F and a D+. My parents don't understand that, however). Well, since I've been "forbidden" from my laptop, I've become as white as a ghost (kinda hard to become one in FL, too), I've gained 5 pounds, and my thyroid problem has gotten worse... I'm not even kidding. Since I lost my laptop, I haven't gone outside unless it was impossible not to. From the second I get home, 'till I have to go to bed, I do homework, watch Comedy Central, and eat. From lack of sun, my tan is now non-existent. My blood levels are f***'d up because of lack o' Vitamin whatever-it-is-you-get-from-the-sun (It's vitamin D, I believe), and I keep 'forgetting' to take my synthroid (what it sounds like, I can't remember how ya' spell it). 'Cuz I eat and watch t.v., 've gained weight. Its actually funny. Suddenly, my grades are slipping even worse, because I can't type my reports due in AP WRLD HIS... The equation becomes complete when you add an = sing, and put the words: Laptop is mine again; at the end of it. MaI eViL pLaN iSh WoRkInG!!! Well, if you've read all of this, slap yourself: you have too much free time. Its a weekend, go outside, dem-mit. But yeah, like my thread's name says, its starting to look like I'm back. Whether this is temporary, or permanent, only time and whether or not my dad is drunk or sober when he decides if I can keep it. I have this thing back just for all of today. If I are a good lil' boy, then maybe he will say I can have it back as long as my grades continue to go ^ like they have been. Well then, I'm done here. Did I miss anything epic while I was gone?
No... you probly should'nave bumped my Bingo Night thread. Of course, now there's a bigger chance people will read it, but there brains will rot, and I'll lose people''s respect. They'll realize how un-funny (<-- Is that a word? Nope, its not. I looked it up) I are. Oh wellz, you've already bumped it. Oh, and just to let people know, my grades have gone up a wee bit. Its still not enough to get off of punishment though. I haven't been able to work on my fic(s) much, but I had a crazy dream last night (not KH related), and it could easily become a story of some sort. I just dun know if I wanna start something new. Wutev. But, I should have enough time this weekend to do some stuff on this fic. Exciting, yes? But I shouldn't even be on here now, so I might not be able to post the stuff until early Monday morning. Peace peoplez...
Aww... That's so sad. I almost cried. I hope you can one day find someone to help dull the pain. Rep'd, 'cuz this is awesome.
CONGRATZ!!! I know what I say isn't going to change your mind (if you've even made any decisions), but I've always loved the names: Tristan - for a boy Rikku - for a girl Oh, and I know that Rikku is a RPG char's name now, but I have a cousin who was named Rikku, and she was born waaay b4 FFX came out. I've always loved the name. Like it even more now that FFX and X-2 are out though, lol.
O.o I wanna hear Mish sing... Oh! I just remembered! I saw on some site, who knows how long ago, that if you play the pokemon theme backwards, you can hear a satanic message. Its when they chant Gotta' Catch 'em all over and over again. Instead, its something like: "I love satan! I love satan!" over and over again. I need to go find that site again... Hold on, when I find it, I'll edit this and put a link. *vanishes* EDIT: HAH! Found it! I listened to it again, and now that I'm just laughing my head off, it doesn't sound as if they purposely did it, its just a coincidence. At first, I was like: "OMFG, everything I know is eVil!!!" Now, its just funny. I first found out about it when I was an avid Poke fan. Here's a link for anyone who cares: Backmasking
*materializes* Another leaving... School sux BaLLz. But, you said you need some alone time too. 'Kay, buh-byez! *Returns to staying away from kh-vids*
First things first.... 100th post for this thread!!! WOOT! xDDD 2nd: My situation is looking brighter than I expected it to. Its starting to seem like I might get off the hook faster than I thought. Today I turned in a few late assignmens for one of my classes, and I pulled the 30 F to a 69.51... Half a point from a C-. This is only one class though, :( 3rd: I have (I think) made all of the adjustments to my storeh that I need to. All I have to do now, is type up what happens after everything I've done. Only in the first and second chapters did I actually change what happened, the rest of the fic I just searched for spelling/grammatical errors. This might change later, but I really don't think so. After I repost my edited fic, I will be unable to make any more updates until my grades are back up. So... Buh-bye, 'cuz I'm about to post it.
