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    Only mentioning a dead kitten isn't something borderlie depressing. she has obiously more reason than only that. so don't go beating yourself up.


    Cupcake will come back when she feels ready.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 26, 2009 in forum: Departure Hall
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    Probably so. If you feel you are in a real threat, do speak to your mother in a very serious conversation. I must add, that sometimes people might not take you seriously because of comunication errors, so you must be serious and show that its really affecting you.

    but since I don't know the current situation. I can't comment any further than that.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 26, 2009 in forum: Help with Life
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    The thing with these matters is that change takes time. I'm not saying your father hitting you is right, but perhaps staying on his good side is better. If he hits you again for no apparent reason, just talk seriously to your mother, she can probably do better at finding out why he treats you the way he does. Try to make your father proud, show him you are thoughtful of his life. And that you are NOT a punching bag.


    I hope your situation does get better.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 26, 2009 in forum: Help with Life
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    This has got to be the most funny material ever. It was so funny and inventive. The robot kinda reminds me of Aigis. but that is the norm. its kinda fun. I wonder what's next.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    It was good(as always), though I'm wondering how you will integrate this. It seems like it might be a hard task. Considering how expansive this story could possibly be. this chapter seemed a bit more 'unorganized' than the others.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    The only person who would de-rep me. The person my first comment was directed to. Ginta, you need to put your emotions on place, before passing raged jugdement upon everything. That is the reason why you have so many problems here.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Look, De-repping me will not work. and you should know that since your only new and you can barely de-rep. On the other hand if I de-rep you.....should I try?...I won't de-rep you. I think you're old enough to know that your actions were inmature and that I was in no way offending you. But I will warn you, do not mess with me. I'm a very calm person, but I will not stand for your Inmaturity. It is sickening. I refuse to help you because you seem to be beyond help. I will not care if you cry by this response, because if anything, I was being kind enough to tell you this. But you refused, and its out of my hands.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Daxma you're right about this. You can find people are somewhat more deep than you might think. Exploring boundaries isn't easy, but perhaps it is necessary. Because while we might think we know everything there is to living our lifes, the people around us shape us, just as much as we shape them. I have seen how I can learn so much from not underestimating people, and I think Daxma is also starting to see that. Because the world around us isn't as simple as we think, and yet, at the same time it is.


    Hope, I made some sense. but being alone all the time isn't healthy. Try to understand your friends and the things that happen around you, and maybe it might help you be a more sociable person.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Help with Life
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    Update

    Okay, made chapter five, again it should have been longer, but I wanted to keep a touch of suspence and a checkhov's gun. I know its shorter than chapter 4, but I just made it as long enough to tie it to chapter 6. Seriously I don't know if anyone sees this, but I'll keep writing. It makes me feel good, even when I'm not that good. Anyone, enjoy. Oh I placed the chapters in quotes, please tell me if it was a wrong Idea.

    Am I making the characters realistic? Is there something wrong with my writing, or the format its in? Please do tell, I need writing advice.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Well, I guess. but I still hope your reason for doing so are the right ones. It just seems un-detailed. He just dies. and that's all. I didn't mean it to sound insulting, but that's just the way it seemed. At least to me.
    Post by: Chevalier, Feb 25, 2009 in forum: Archives