It does. =o I'm really enjoying this one.
After a few moments, Sora lifted his head to gaze at Kairi in the doorway. Though he still saw Kairi's figure in there, he suddenly realized that the air around them reeked of darkness. He blinked and furrowed his brows, honestly trying to see the truth now. He sensed some trickery, and he wanted the truth of the matter.
That they do. xD
Sora gritted his teeth in frustration, hearing in Riku's tone that he had no choice but to obey the order. He looked from Riku to Kairi, his hard stare softening slightly. Kairi, forgive me, he thought, flexing his right hand. A moment later, he saw the Kingdom Key appearing in his grasp. However, he hesitated with lifting his gaze to Kairi, afraid that this talk of threatening her had upset her in anyway.
Okie dokie, sounds good. xD *Shrugs* Hey, not all my ideas can be winners! xP
Sora's eyes widened, shock and disbelief showing in his big blue eyes. "What?" He glanced at Kairi in the doorway, shocked that his friend was putting him in this position. "What good will that do!?" He turned his head again and looked at Riku, frustration in his gaze.
I really don't know. xD It seems kinda random and pointless, you know?
Sora blinked, coming out of his thoughts. He gazed at "Kairi" in front of him for a few seconds before he turned to look over his shoulder at his best friend. "I'm not seeing it, Riku," he said tensely, the brunet restraining his anger. Lashing out wouldn't have been a good move, especially since Riku had a very tight grip on his arm.
I figured she'd be walking with crutches, that's all. So it wouldn't really interfere with anything since she's still able to move around freely...
Sora furrowed his brows, a soft growl leaving him. He was sick of this game Riku was playing! But he didn't dare lash out at his friend; he had done that before, and he had been proven wrong. Riku was always right, even when he didn't want to believe it. Was this one of those cases, or was Riku actually incorrect about this?
I've had the idea for a while, but that's all I got. I thought maybe it would upset Roxas seeing Namine injured. That was it, really.
Sora furrowed his brows, shutting his eyes for a moment. He didn't fully believe Riku, but he realized that he only had once chance to get out of his grasp, and that was for him to try and convince Riku he believed that "thing" was a Heartless. "Fine," he said, his voice flat. "Can you let go now?"
He goes there, but she's not home, so he's told she's at the park and he sees her there. ...I have one more idea, but I'm not sure if it's...
Sora stopped struggling when he heard Riku say the name of their enemy, the name of the Heartless making him think logically for a moment. "How's that possible?" he asked tensely. "I don't feel threatened!" A Heartless, whether it was visibly present or about to ambush you, always made you feel a sense of doom or threat. Here, he didn't feel anything but a desire to run over to that person in the doorway.
Alrighty, awesome. 8D
Sora grunted, his eyes widening at Riku's force. He was serious, wasn't he? But Sora was too caught up over the idea of seeing Kairi again, and embracing her like he had longed to do for so long. "Let me go!" he shouted again, starting to get angry with his best friend. All he wanted was to run to her; was that so much to ask?!
'Kay, so I guess we'll go with that. xD I'll copy it into Word, just because that's a really good habit to get into.
Sora furrowed his brows, turning his head to look at Riku. "A trick? That's impossible! I see her standing right there!" He brought up a free hand and pointed at the girl, his eyes following the movement and landing on Kairi in the doorway. He felt his heart breaking each second he was restrained from getting to her, but in the back of his head, he was wondering why she hadn't called out to him, or why she wasn't scolding Riku for keeping them apart.
So pretty much it would just be whether Roxas goes into her bedroom and speaks to her or his first encounter with her is at the park. I'd actually...
Sora grunted and stumbled back a step when Riku forcefully tugged at his arm. He gave his friend a confused look, but the frustration of not being able to embrace his love was enough to make that confusion turn to anger. "What're you doing? Lemme go!" He attempted to pull his arm out of Riku's grasp, the brunet shifting his gaze from Riku towards Kairi by the doorway. Why wasn't Riku letting him run to her?!
