Disclaimer: If I owned kh it would come out in English first. P.S. everything in italics are from the kh1 manga v.1 -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Long ago the world was united and filled with warm light. It was a dusty, desolate field. The only sign that anyone had ever lived there were a few indistinct ruins. Canyons enclosed the entire area and only parched weeds had managed to squeak by with any semblance of survival. Ven couldn’t help but shutter, for despite the stifling atmosphere this place was a graveyard. Already hundreds of thousands of people died because of Thanroe’s vendetta, and the list had yet to be completed. Of all the keybladers only the chasers where left. Ironic really, because they where the ones who started all this. People loved the light, and eventually began fighting over it. As he walked through the rows of keyblades as dusty and dead as the field its self, he couldn’t help but feel his anger rise. All this death and destruction simply because Thanroe had been told no, and he didn’t even take it out on those who denied him his wish in the first place. He took it out on everyone the chasers had called friends. All those who once called Thanroe himself friend. Soon Ven found himself at a set of crossroads between the rows of weapons. In the center stood three blades that looked as dusty and disserted as the others. They were the original blades of the chasers which had been cast aside when it had been discovered that they would not be strong enough for the upcoming battle. But they would make a perfect supplement for the new blades. Then, darkness found it’s way into people’s hearts. Ven was not the only person at the crossroads. Terra and Aqua had come like he, in full battle dress, to meet their fate. The armor was heavy, bulky and not very well liked, but it was necessary. Suddenly a sonic boom like sound pierced their helmets. Something was coming. Through the dust it was hard to make out exactly who or what but that didn’t matter. They didn’t need to see him to know it was Thanroe. As he stepped closer and closer more of his face had could be seen. He was haggard and old looking, but by no means feeble. His bald head was bent forward but his eyes looked straight ahead. All of this made him look fairly creepy but he one thing that made his appearance all the more cynical was that fact that he was no older then twenty-five years old. He must have done so much dark magic that it aged him prematurely. Darkness consumed the hearts and light of the people, and in a flash it spread… For a second his image flickered and split into two identical visions. The second then quickly shifted into armor like the chasers wore except more streamlined. Blaze. It had to be. Ven had prepared to lunge at the traitor when a hand stopped him. Of course, the level headed Terra wasn’t going to let him rush into things. Then the enigmatic knight did something wholly unexpected: Terra himself took off running as fast as he could to clear the gap between the once friends. Thanroe and Blaze stopped just as Terra started to pounce. The old magician simply raised his hand and caused the solid rock in front of him to rise, smashing into Terra midair. And the world disappeared into darkness. Terra buckled and rolled, tying not to break his neck despite the thick armor. He didn’t even have a chance to catch his breath before Thanroe raised his arm again. For a moment Terra felt fear trickle down his spine for he was sure that Thanroe was going to raise the ground out from under him a second time and start bouncing him like a rag doll. That didn’t happen. Instead he raised the platform he was on, cutting Terra off from being able to attack or join his friends. He couldn’t attack but he could be attacked. Blaze jumped and on the way down sent a massive jolt of lightning downwards. It was less then one minute into the fight and already his armor had saved him, but the shock had caused massive cracks in it. If he wasn’t careful his armor would crumble like clay. No sooner had the sparks died then he heard a rushing sound. Thanroe had neglected to take into account the chasers own talented magician. Aqua had used her power to raise the earth in a shower of debris catapulting Ven to Terra’s level. He didn’t even miss a beat as he landed and rush forward. But a glimmer of light remained in the hearts of children… Ven’s oncoming assault was met by Blaze’s blade. From out of nowhere a enormous jut of ice aimed for Blaze missed by inches and pushed the two combatants apart. Somehow Aqua had found her way up to the second level of the battle field. Hundreds of feet above, Thanroe flicked his wrist and a hurricane appeared gathering up dozens of the dead keyblades. The hurricane twisted and tuned until it was nothing but a long thin snake then it headed straight down. Blaze did a side flip and landed on it perfectly as if it were a skateboard. Blaze raced neck and neck with Aqua while sending towers of ice and wind to crush her; she dodged every one of them but at this rate, her agility would soon run out . Before she even truly noticed what happened Ven had attacked Blaze from above, all the while coming to her rescue. Within seconds Ven had found an opening in Blaze’s seemingly impassible defense and took it. He sent a bolt of lightning straight to the traitor’s heart but he missed. Instead, it just got wrapped around his hurricane board, doing nothing. Somehow the fight had gotten to the top titer of the field. Blaze flew across a huge gape and landed beside his bother, Thanroe. Children gathered their glimmers of light and recreated the world. Ven jumped on the tail of he hurricane, trying to get across but he was unable to keep his balance and fell off right at the edge of the canyon. Unable to grab the side and pull himself up, he fell. About half way down he tried to use his Keyblade to stop. It didn’t work, actually all it did was pull a three ton rock down with him. Aqua jumped, trying to help but the hurricane just drug her back down. The fall cracked her helmet, so now her blue eyes and turquoise hair were visible. While Ven landed on his feet. He then came over to make sue she was all right, but there was no need. Before she was all the way up she raised her keyblade and sent her personal favorite spell, honeycomb, at Terra. Instantly he was trapped in a glasslike bubble which broke his fall. By then it was too late to notice that the hurricane had came up under him and pushed him up further. Without so much as a flick of Thanroe’s wrist the hurricane stopped and put Terra down right beside him. he charged but that was a bad idea. Thanroe sent a blanket of ice up his right arm freezing it in place. Terra stumbled back and watched as the ice crept even further up his arm. The recreated world, however, was no longer united… It was divided into several smaller worlds. Somehow Ven had gotten up to the top and charged at Thanroe, who just caught the boy’s face in his hand and, looking right at Terra, squeezed. The cracking of the helmet sent a chill down Terra’s spine. Had it cracked his skull too? Terra rushed forward desperate to save his friend but Blaze just bade his pet hurricane to knock him down off the cliff. Still clutching Ven’s face in his hand, Thanroe walked to the edge of the cliff, his brother beside him. Making sue Aqua was watching he let out a burst of dark energy that froze Ven’s entire body, and then he simply let go. He then watched with a sick kind of pleasure as Ven bushed agents the side of the cliff as he fell, with each contact breaking another chunk off the icicle. He landed right in front of Aqua. Using his eyes, the only part of him still mobile, he begged her to fix it. To use her magic to make the pain go away but, of course she couldn’t, no matter how much she wanted to: she had used all her magic to save Terra before. Because the true light was still hidden deep within the darkness… -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Sora had been sitting on the little island watching the sun set for about ten minuets before Riku came up behind him. It was something they had always done since before Kairi had come to the island. It was their time to hang out after homework and school. It was a ritual never missed (unless they where out saving the worlds). Seeing the look on his friend’s face, Riku could tell something was wrong. Sora’s normally bright face was twisted into a grimace that showed he was thinking hard about something unpleasant. That in it’s self was a rare occurrence. Sora never thought hard about any thing… at least he never used to. Sora had changed over the months they had been separated and Riku was finding more and more things that weren’t the same to him. It wasn’t necessarily a bad change, but it was different. Sora was more responsible and more observant. Many had remarked on how much the spiky haired child had matured. But Riku had changed too: he was more relaxed and less completive. It was a nice change, for everybody. “We were wrong. Everything’s changed.” Sora said without even looking at his friend. “What made you change your mind.” The blond asked. “School.” Was the boy’s only reply. “Come on Sora, your going to have to do better then that.” Riku said, trying to coax the entire truth out of the keyblade master. Sora sighed and pulled a stack of papers from his back pocket. It was today’s test. Handing it to Riku, he gave a little smile at the big red “F” on his paper. “Nothing we learned matters. Not here.” He said sadly and waited for his friend’s reply. For a moment there was only silence then Riku spoke, obviously choosing his words carefully. “It dose matter… Just not on test.” Sora turned to look at his friend. How could Riku say that? “Oh really? How?” The brunet demanded of him. Riku just smiled in response. “Well, at least now you can beat Tidus with a sword.” He said with a grin. “Tidus? What about you?” Sora teased. “Maybe with a bit more practice.” Riku returned. Sora and Riku just stared at each other for a minute, challenging each other to be the first to laugh. Eventually they cracked at the same time. Suddenly their jubilant moment was interrupted by an ear splitting scream from the main island. Soon several more followed. Something was wrong. Terribly wrong. The two boys stated to run towards the island. Something told them that this might have to do with the letter they got form the king a few days ago. It hadn’t told them much, but what it did say gave the keybladers the impression that something was going on. Something big. They didn’t even bother with the boats. Untying them would take too much time they just swam to the opposite shore. From there it took ten minute to run up the path to town. By then the blanket of night had fallen, but tonight that it wasn’t the same cool, calming blanket that usually fell on Destiny Islands. Tonight it was a thick, foreboding type of darkness that reminded Riku of the true darkness. The same frigid, suffocating darkness that had became his entire being for more then an entire year. The darkness that almost destroyed his heart and his friends. The same darkness that he vowed he would never see again. As they approached the town they saw what all the commotion was about. Heartless hundreds of them everywhere. But that was the least of Sora and Riku’s problems. The true problem wasn’t the heartless themselves, rather it was their commander. “ Xigbar?” Sora asked. “Missed me?” asked the Freeshooter. -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Worlds away from our heroes something just as strange was happing. In a spotless white room, sat the Oracle. She was a being hailed as all-knowing, but in fact, she was far from it. If she know everything she would not be in this situation. She would not be in this hell. Behind her in the bight, white room shadows grew and pooled into a human form. A shadow. It had no distinguishable features other then the outline of its original self. The shadow walked over silently and sat down beside the statue, but just because he made no noise did not mean that he was not noticed. “It is done.” He said, his voice gave. It was obvious that whatever was ’done’ wasn’t something particularly pleasant. If she could The Oracle would have smiled at his attitude, but she couldn’t move a muscle except those needed to speak. She couldn’t even see the shadow due to the long cloak hood covering her eyes. All she could see was white. The same white she had seen every second of every day for ten long years. “Thank you, Blaze.” She said. “I don’t like this. Was what happened before all for nothing?” He asked. “If you can just trust me Blaze, just for a little while, you and I will be released form our prisons and then we can release and rejoin our friends. You want that, don’t you?” “Aero, of course I trust you, but I think it was a bad idea to just let that damn Organization reform. They are sloppy and unpredictable.” Blaze said looking at her. “They will also be invaluable allies. They will lead the keybearers right where we want them. And with them we will be able to break free from our prisons.” She said, reminding her friend of exactly what was at stake. “I still don’t like it.” The shadow replied. “Sacrifices must be made.” Aero said, her voice slopping into a sad little whisper. “Sacrifices must always be made. The rewards will be well worth it. ” She continued bitterly. “I do miss being able to see my reflection.” Blaze admitted. Aero gave a bitter little laugh. “As don’t I… As don’t I.” -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- So what did you think? Please tell me. Also if you have any idea for new worlds let me know. Just nothing over PG-13, since that’s the highest the cannon went. NO FLAMES!! Constructive criticism only. Don’t tell me I’m doing something wrong unless you tell me what I can do to fix it. P.S. Aqua, Ven and Terra will be in the story and not just in flash backs. It will take a few chapters though. This will be a long fic. Easily fifty plus chapters. P.P.S I've posted up to chapter six on fanfiction.net. So take a look at it there if you want to.
i have this idea for a fanfic and i need some one willing to help me write it. here's the summary (and pic if it will work) after sora and co saved the world from org XIII they accidently unleashed a power greater them they could could handle. now they have to unite all four chasers ( Aqua, terra, ven, and blaze). simple right? ah...no. see all of them are in a state of suspended animation and blaze is resposible for creating the power they released in the frst place. the only help Sora, Riku and Kairi have to find the chasers is Aqua's clarvoint sister who often speakes in riddles. but what if evey thing wasn't as it appeared? and what connection does Kairi have to one of these warriors? better then it sounds. but i do need help.
