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  1. sorarulz
    niiiiiiiiiiiiiice!! its awesome!! i'm so glad i came back, you're story gave me a couple of really good pointers for mine. ^^ i cant wait for the next part.. if there is one...
    Post by: sorarulz, Sep 13, 2008 in forum: Archives
  2. sorarulz
    yes i think i could stick you in...
    i kinda finished WAYY past part 3 and im starting on the sequel, so I could put you in there. :] i thought this would have gotten like... pushed ALL the way at the back.. page 4 lolz
    Post by: sorarulz, Sep 13, 2008 in forum: Archives
  3. sorarulz
    OH YEAH! IM FINALLY IN IT!! I SAVED SORA!! WHAT NOW!! XD (sry, i havent been here in a while, so I was catching up on what I missed.)

    I choosee.. sleep, since it sounds so cool!!

    Nice 2 or 3 chapters that I missed, btw, very good.
    I miss the tenseful moments of truth now, it was all so fun.
    Keep going tho! ;)
    Post by: sorarulz, Aug 20, 2008 in forum: Archives
  4. sorarulz

    ~The War~

    Chapter 11~ New faces, old faces
    “AH! HELP!†Ren Okashi yelled, running and tripping over something. She looked behind her just as Ed Elric jumped in front of her and cut the heartless down the middle.
    “You ok?†He asked, looking behind him. Ren nodded and stood up. “Why didn’t you just transmute a wall or something?â€
    “I was too scared. I thought I was as good as dead.†Ren panicked. Ed put his hands on her shoulders, and she looked up in shock.
    “As long as I’m around, you’re perfectly safe, ok?†Ed assured her. She looked away for a second, then looked back and nodded.
    “Yeah.†She agreed, smiling. Ed blushed and looked away.
    “Right, now, let’s go. We need to find a way out.†Ed explained, running down the hallway, Ren following right behind him.
    “Freaking Ed, running off like that.†Elly Elric complained. She looked around, her spear at the ready. “He’s scaring me senseless… What is this place anyway?†Elly asked herself, looking around at the shelves of broken dolls and toys. She picked up a small teddy bear with a broken eye, and ripped arm. She looked at it in her hand and put it back on the shelf. She looked back, and stared into the darkness. She walked forward suddenly, urging to see what was into the darkness. Something fell behind her and she turned on the dot, and stared. Ed stood, staring emotionless at her.
    “ED! YOU SCARED THE HECK OUT OF ME!†she yelled at her older brother. He said nothing. “Ed! Stop staring at me with that clueless face!†Nothing. Elly started to get scared. “Ed, you’re scaring me, snap out of it.†Elly walked forward as Ed took a swing at her with his blade. “Whoa!†She looked up to see Ed’s eye’s dark and clouded, not the usual gold and bright. “Ed?†she asked. Ed ran forward, taking another swing at her. She dodged it, holding her spear out. Ed hit it, breaking it in two, then holding his blade up. Elly looked up at him with fear. “ED! NO!!!!†she screamed as the blade came down.
    “Ren! Ren! Where are you?!†Ed yelled, walking down a dusty hallway. He looked around, holding out his flashlight. “REN!†He yelled again. He looked into a small dark room and walked into it. He held the flashlight up, glancing around the room, watching for any sudden movements. He felt something at his foot and he looked down.
    “W-Winry??†he asked, his eyes wide with fear. He looked up to see Ren looking down at her, knife in hand. “R-Ren?†Ren looked up, her beautiful blue eyes, a blood red.
    “You loved her, you really loved her.†Ren glared at Ed. “And I couldn’t have that.â€
    “R-Ren…†Ed asked, his voice shivering. Ren held the knife up. “REN!â€
    “Ren! Ren! Ren! Wake up!†Ed yelled, shaking Ren’s shoulder. Ren looked up and stared at Ed.
    “Ed?†she asked. “I had the scariest dream.â€
    “I killed Winry.†The room went silent. Only the sound of a ticking clock that stood in the corner could overwrite the silence.
    “That’s weird, because I had a dream I killed Elly…†Ed shivered.
    “Could it mean something?†Ren asked, sitting up. “Could it mean that it was wrong to rebel against the military?â€
    “No, it’s not saying that!†Ed argued. “It was right to rebel against them! I mean, the State was under the command of a homunculus! You knew that the soldiers weren’t going to stand around and wait to be killed off one by one!â€
    “I know! But what about Hughes…â€
    “Hughes knew to much! There was nothing we could do!â€
    “But what about Riza and Mustang! They’re off fighting in some war somewhere! They’re going to get killed!â€
    “No necessarily, I got a call from them, they’re right behind us all the way, ready to send out their fleet of men when we say.â€
    “You mean-“
    “Yup, me, Mustang, and Riza have the whole thing planned out, and we’re going to win this war.â€
    Hmm… kinda strayed off to my FMA side of the story… heh, new side! XD
    I’ll get back to the others next chapter
    Ren Okashi- Ed’s friend
    Elly Elric- Ed’s sister
    Riza Hawkeye- someone Ed knows, good at shooting.
    Roy Mustang- some annoying person Ed knows, The Flame Alchemist
    Winry Rockbell- Ed’s best friend ^^
    Enjoy till next chapter! XD
    Post by: sorarulz, Aug 20, 2008 in forum: Archives
  5. sorarulz
    Woot, I'm back now. For all of those who are still waiting for my other stories to be continued, please be patient, and I'll have them there soon.

    As for my FMA story...

    I've deciced for it to let other people's character's in. FMA or Non FMA, I don't mind.
    Just don't steal the title The Water Alchemist, The Earth Alchemist, or the Fullmetal Alchemist. I get pretty ticked for that... anyway.
    I'm accepting new characters starting, NOW!
    It's about my character starting as a alchemist in the military. I got the idea from a video I saw, and it follows the video untill the 2nd part.
    V Let's start this! V

    Part 1
    "Welcome to Central Headquaters in Amestris. I am Furher Bradely." a large man greeted. He grabbed a small, silver pocket watch off of his desk. "Welcome to the State. From now on, you're a State Alchemist. More specificly, the Earth Alchemist. Now you're under the direct command of Colonel Roy Mustang, so you might want to get there as soon as possible. Oh, and don't forget this." He threw the watch at me, and I caught it. "Now run off to find the Colonel."
    "Yes, sir!" I studdered, still holding the watch. I put it in my pocket, and saluted him before walking out.
    I walked into a small room, and looked around. A small meeting was being held. I sat down in a seat nearby and tried to listen.
    "So these things, called homunculi are somewhere in the military?" a young man in the front asked.
    "Well that's what I think." another man answered. He stood in front of the room, a woman with blonde hair standing behind him. "So we need to attack, so go!"
    "Yes, sir!" the room saluted. They walked out and I stood up. The woman whispered something in his ear and pointed at me. He nodded and walked toward me. I saluted him.
    "You're the Earth Alchemist, right?" I nodded. "Then I'm your supervisor, Colonel Mustang."
    "You're Colonel Mustang?!"
    "Yes, and I'm sorry for dragging you out into battle on your first day, but they have someone I know."
    "Who sir?" I asked.
    "The Fullmetal Alchemist."
    I sat in the back of the truck, bouncing along with the road.
    "They've taken more than one hostage, sir."
    "I wouldn't worry, Mustang, they are State Alchemists after all."
    "How are you feeling?" Greed sneeringly asked a young boy tied up.
    "Darn you! You won't get away with this!" he complained
    "Don't test me." Greed warned, putting his arm around Winry.
    "LET HER GO!"
    "So, getting angry because I'm touching your girlfriend?"
    "She's not my girlfriend!" the boy yelled
    "Right, right. I'll make a deal." Greed explained. "You put my soul into a body like your brother's here, and I'll let you guys go."
    "What a joke. Did you say you want a body like that?" the boy asked. One of the ropes broke. "You don't know how much sorrow he carries, or what he has been through and beared to regain his body." More ropes broken, and it was clear the boy was starting to get angry. "Just because he lost his body and became only a soul..."
    "I don't understand at all." The boy swung forward.
    "Then I'll teach you!" he yelled, the rest of the ropes breaking. He knocked something out of Greed's hands and punched him in the face.
    "Is that all you've got?" he asked smuggly.
    "Not yet!" the boy yelled, backflipping off of Greed's face. He landed and clapped his hands together, turned his automail arm into a sword, and ran at Greed, taking a swing at him. He stopped for a second and cut the ropes on his brother and Winry. He turned, smiled, and ran back at Greed. A loud "boom" stopped him.
    "What was that?" he asked.
    "It must have been the military." Winry answered. The boy turned back to Greed. "Darn it. It was so close." The boy and his brother turned to Winry and stared blankly. "I wanted to watch Greed picking on shorty." Winry complained, transforming into a boy with black spikey hair, black eyes, and pale skin. " I guess time has run out."
    "Envy!" the boy yelled.
    "Darn you. When did you..." Greed complained. "Out of my way!" Greed pushed the boy and his brother and ran at Envy. Envy grabbed his hand and threw him to the ground. He put his foot on Greed's throat.
    "You got those two hostages because of me, didn't you? Can't you thank me?"
    "Where is the real Winry?!" the boy asked.
    "Winry? She was never in Central to begin with." He swung Greed around then threw him at the wall. The boy glared back at Envy as he ran out of the room, laughing.
    "Wait!" he yelled, running after him.

    Part 2
    "The Elric Brothers, Colonel Mustang's convey, and Greed... This is a good chance to remove all those who get in our way. Sloth, Wrath, Gluttony, Lust! Go homunculi!" Furher Bradely demanded. "We homunculi are the ones that will obtain Philosopher's stone." He took off his eye patch, and the insigna of the homunculi rolled out, appearing on his eye.
    The boy kept running down the hallway until he came into another room. He slowed down a bit, when he saw someone at the end of it.
    "You are safe Fullmetal!" Colonel Mustang yells.
    "Colonel!" the boy's brother yelled. The boy glared at Mustang and ran toward him. "Big brother!" The boy took a swing at Mustang, Mustang does a backflip, changes back to Envy, and lands on the second floor landing.
    "Good job." Envy congratulated him.
    "You're amazing big brother! You knew it was the fake one!"
    "It was..." the boy asked.
    "Long time no see, fullmetal boy." someone greeted. He turned and more homunculi stood by Envy. One of them, Gluttony, jumped down and started to attack the boy. He dodged them and jumped back.
    Roy Mustang stopped, me right behind him.
    "Something wrong Colonel?" Hawkeye asked him.
    "Can you hear anything?" he asked us. We all shook our heads no.
    "Not really..." I answered. I looked down and saw small streams or water flowing down at our feet. I looked up to the dark hallway, confused. A large wave of water came at us.
    "RUN!" I yelled. To late. The water rushed us back to the other side, most of us soaked. I looked up and Riza and Colonel Mustang were staring at the monster that had caused this damage. The other members of the group lay all other the bridge, dazed and confused. The Colonel and Riza stood up, ready to fight. I did the same. The monster lunged at us.
    "Let me!" Mustang yelled, starting to run at it. Riza tripped him and stayed calm.
    "What'd you do that for?!" he asked.
    "Back off please. You're useless against a water monster!" Riza shouting it as the Colonel sat, surprised. "Colonel, I'll deal with this. You and the new girl take care of the Elric Brothers." The Colonel snapped out of it, and nodded. He got up, nodded at me, and we ran toward the hallway.
    "I got you!" Lust yelled, lunging at the boy. The Colonel snapped, and it set flame on her. I stared in amazment.
    "I see you are still alive. I don't have to send funeral offerings."
    "Colonel!" The boy's brother yelled. The homunculi lunged at Mustang, but he sent flames at them. He started to walk to the boy and I followed.
    "I didn't ask for your help." the boy complained.
    "You may say that, but you were troubled by the homunculi."
    "Envy!" the boy yelled, noticing them coming back.
    "Don't think you killed us because did once."
    "Then as many times as you wish." the boy snapped, preparing for battle. I did the same.
    "Ready?" Mustang asked. The water homunculi appeared, sliding through the spikes that rained toward her. She took on her human figure and stared at several military officals appeared.
    "Elric brothers, Colonel Mustang, we came as extend." Armstrong boomed across the theatre like room. I noticed the glittering pocket watch chains.
    "That's amazing! All the State alchemist are here!" I yelled. Riza appeared behind Mustang, ready to fight as well. The battle had begun, the military verses the homunculi. I ran over to were the boy was and helped him.
    "You don't look familuar. Who are you?"
    "New girl on the block. The Earth Alchemist."
    "Earth huh? Pretty interesting." he smiled. We ran in opposite directions, attacking the homunculi. I came face to face with Envy and Gluttony. I looked at the transmutation circle on my hand and grinned. I put it on the ground and the Earth broke apart, sending Envy and Gluttony apart.
    "Nice skills!" the boy yelled at me.
    "Thanks!" I yelled back. Envy charged at me, and I put my hand on the ground again. A tall tower of rock pushed me up and I stared at Envy below. He glared up at me. I grinned down at him, when someone run up by me.
    "Furher Bradely?" I asked. He held a sword at me.
    "Get away from her! "the boy yelled, tackling the Furner. I jumped down to, the Furner and the boy standing face to face.
    "What's going on?" I asked the boy. He made a swip at the Furher, and his eyepatch fell off. I gasped and covered my mouth. "The- He's one of them!"
    "What do you want with her anyway?!" the boy demanded, holding his blade to the Furher's neck. I put my hand on the ground, and a tower of rocks lifter the boy up. "Wha-?" he looked confused.
    "I'll get Bradely! You worry about the others!" I yelled. "Ah!" I jumped back as the Furher made at me.
    "Foolish girl, you don't know who you're messing with." Bradely wanred. I got ready for battle and he ran at me again. My cheek hit his sword and I put my hand on the ground. The rock crumbled under him and he changed into Envy.
    "Envy!" I yelled. He ran at me and punched me in the stomach. I fell to the ground, coughing. The boy stood in front of me, facing Envy.
    "Get away Fullmetal Pipsqueak. This battle is between me and her."
    "No you're my opponent! And I'll ingore that Pipsqueak comment." the boy ran at Envy, taking a few swings at him. Riza came back and helped me up.
    "We need to get out of here, the building's going to collaspe."
    "What about him?" I asked, pointing at the boy.
    "He'll be ok." Riza assured. I got out of her grip and Sloth came back by and grabbed me with her water.
    "Ah! Help!" I screamed. Riza held up the gun and pointed it at Sloth, but Mustang held out his arm.
    "Don't shoot! You might hit the girl!" I struggled against the water. Without thinking, I used my alchemy.
    "LET ME GO!!!!" I screamed, super loud. Everyone stared in shock.
    "You over did it." I heard Armstrong say. The boy building fell apart, and Sloth dropped me. The boy ran away from Envy, caught me, and ran out of the building.
    I stood, bowing my head.
    "I'm sorry, I let the homunculi get away." I apoligized.
    "Don't worry about it, it's not like we can't find them again." Mustang assured me. I nodded, Riza still bandaging my wounds.
    "Sorry, I've got to go, Colonel. Later Hawkeye."
    "Bye, don't forget about your assessment." Riza reminded him.
    "Don't worry, I won't." the boy ran up to me. "You were great in there, I hope I'll see you around." he smiled, started to run off, and waved at us.
    Part 3 later! :D
    Thread by: sorarulz, Aug 20, 2008, 3 replies, in forum: Archives
  6. sorarulz
    YESH! OMG! guys, I am SO sorry I haven't been on in a while... i just got a myspace, and I had testing at my school, so I was REALLY busy. but Im back now! and yes, kasai u can have Kairi (talk 2 NAmien a little, so she wont kill Roxas.... :P)
    Post by: sorarulz, May 2, 2008 in forum: Retirement Home
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    "I MISSED THROWING A RANDOM PERSON DOWN A LAVA PIT! THAT'S NOT COOL!!!" Sakura yelled. "Well my homiez, I think I'm gonna go back into my room and watch those cops shows, but cheer for the ganstas." Sakura pimp walks back into her room. She quickly comes back out. "I'm also missed the throwing HSM into the lava pit. Oh well, I still have one DVD." She throws into the lava pit, watching a demonaic cloud appear, then dissapear. "Wow, it really is evil.." She pimp walks back into her room.
    ((Lol, they are evil jerks))
    Post by: sorarulz, Apr 10, 2008 in forum: Retirement Home
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    "Ok then....." Sakura started. "Um... what's going on here anyway?"
    Post by: sorarulz, Apr 10, 2008 in forum: Retirement Home
  9. sorarulz
    O wow. That's... interesting Destined. You've gotten better. :)
    I'm still wondering; What did happen to Riku after Mickey's funeral 5 years ago, when Crystal, my character, comes in, and will Sora and Kairi get married!? :)
    Post by: sorarulz, Apr 6, 2008 in forum: Archives
  10. sorarulz
    Oh thank you. Its really wonderful. Better than I can do -.- and everyone has those days when they suck at the stuff they're best at! ;)
    Post by: sorarulz, Apr 6, 2008 in forum: Art Shop
  11. sorarulz
    Namine looked around, trying to find someone she knew. She walked toward the cafeteria, searching franticaly for Sora, or Kairi.
    "I'm still gonna kill you Roxas." she mumbled to herself.

    Roxas watched as the boy and two girls walked away from the brown haired girl. She smiled and waved after them. She turned and looked directly at Roxas, her eyes wide with shock. Aw ****. Roxas thought.

    Ilia turned after waving goodbye to Link and Zelda, and turned, only to stare at a boy, hiding behind a bookcase. His blonde hair spiked up, as his blue eyes were wide with shock. His face was flushed a deep red from being caught.
    "Um.. hi." Ilia finally said, ending the long akward silence. The boy swallowed.
    "Hi. Um.. were those your friends who left?" the boy asked, stil uneasy.
    "Yeah. Oh, um, maybe I should introduce myself." Ilia realized. "I'm Ilia."
    "Roxas." the boy said, the tension between them vanishing.
    "Roxas? I think there was a girl with blonde hair running everywhere over the school looking for you." Ilia giggled. Roxas shivered.
    "I'll just keep out of her reach. She's probally already gonna kill me." Roxas said, stepping out from the bookcase, and walking over to Ilia. "So, um, you wanna go get something to eat somewhere?" Roxas's paled face quickly flushed back into the deep red before. Ilia blushed slightly.
    "Um, sure." she said, picking up her things, and walking out with Roxas.
    Post by: sorarulz, Apr 6, 2008 in forum: Retirement Home
  12. sorarulz
    Namine rushed off to her locker and slammed the door shut.
    "Dammit Roxas." she cursed.

    Roxas inhaled while locking though the books. Nothing interesting here.. he looked out of the corner of his eye and saw a girl talking to a boy. The girl had beautiful brown hair and blue eyes. Wow, Namine will kill me..

    "Yup! Its me, the one and only Ilia from Ordon Village! I missed you after you ran off for Hyrule.. But, what matters is now me, you, Zelda, and Minda are together!" she explained, smiling.
    Post by: sorarulz, Mar 25, 2008 in forum: Retirement Home
  13. sorarulz
    Yea, I back for one more, but I'll keep the other sig you made me somewhere so I can still use that one.

    Any Specific Colors: Hum.. some black, pink and dark blue
    Text: Quiet and Gental ((spelling please))
    Anything else: somewhere in there, include Eureka in really pretty font in... um... er... sky blue..
    Thanks again! ^^
    Post by: sorarulz, Mar 25, 2008 in forum: Art Shop
  14. sorarulz
    Namine angrily looked around the normal spots Roxas would go, but no sign. She puffed out her cheeks, no fearing what came next.
    "ROXAS! WHERE ARE YOU!?" she screamed.

    "Roxas! Where are you?!" a voice echoed in the library. Roxas inhaled and exhaled as he carefully walked further back. Namine's not gonna find you, so chill out.. he thought.

    Ilia looked one last time, not seeing any mangas and walked back toward the front, picking up her stuff and turning to the table behind her.
    Post by: sorarulz, Mar 25, 2008 in forum: Retirement Home