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  1. Petor
    Apology

    Glad to hear you're nearly done. Sorry I didn't give any feedback on your work but my computer's got a virus so I'm using either my dad's computer or my PS3 to go on the internet until my computer's fixed or I get a replacement
    Post by: Petor, Jul 28, 2010 in forum: Archives
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    Nice work on the chapters. Sorry I'm late but I've been busy at college, was ill for the past 2 weeks. Right now, I'm still recovering.
    Post by: Petor, Oct 16, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    That was a quick chapter. Anyway, I mentioned the website about where I thought it could be a good opening if it was like a tv show and here's the link:
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=E2w2R39QV4Q
    Don't worry, it's just an opinion.
    Post by: Petor, May 22, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Nice chapters so far. I bet Yzma will be more madly concerned about Kuzco being still alive than she would about the hedgehog potion Kronk dropped. (snickers)
    Post by: Petor, May 3, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    The 'Huge Waterfall' chapter was good. What I don't believe is that after all of the worlds Sora, Sonic and went to so that they could get the chaos emeralds, 4 of the emeralds they found were fake! It's almost like Eggman used technology similar to what the Meterax from Sonic X used to make the fake emeralds or took a page from Tails' book and made the fake emeralds himself. Maybe even advanced the technology if those fakes can fool Shadow. I wonder what wil happen next.
    Post by: Petor, Mar 15, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Wow

    I never expected Sora and co. to end up in world of Emperor's new groove, let alone Sora turning into a hedgehog. Oh and about the email I gotten rid of before, I actually did some counting through the other chapters. Its 1 in Station Square, 2 in Port Royal, 2 in Twilight Town, 2 in TWTNW, 2 in Agrabah and so that makes 9 unless you do some editing on at least two or more of the chapters.
    Post by: Petor, Feb 13, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    Great work! I was playing an mv of 'A Whole New World' while looking at the lyrics here and I could just imagine Sora and Kairi about to kiss each other at the end of the song. Too bad Shadow interrupted though. And Sora was so close too!
    Post by: Petor, Jan 24, 2009 in forum: Archives
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    It should be interesting to see how having Hara and Ryoko there will affect the new worlds they and the others will go to like, for example, The Land of Dragons or Pride Land.
    Post by: Petor, Dec 15, 2008 in forum: Archives
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    Hi, it's been a while. You did a good start on the add-on. I look forward to the next chapter.
    Post by: Petor, Dec 15, 2008 in forum: Archives
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    To SlippingStar
    Actually, COM is straight after the first KH so Sora is still 14, but probably a few months older, so he is 15 in KHII
    Post by: Petor, Dec 1, 2008 in forum: Archives
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    I looked at it a few times and I gotta say, a few errors e.g. how did the Lord of Dragons get special summoned? Other than that, everything else looks good so far.
    Post by: Petor, Nov 10, 2008 in forum: Archives
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    Nice cliffhanger. Just a thought, but maybe you could add more characters later on in the story.
    Post by: Petor, Oct 31, 2008 in forum: Archives
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    Nice move, adding the part of when Hara who forces Sora to battle with her on Destiny Islands. Can't wait to see what happens next.
    Post by: Petor, Oct 30, 2008 in forum: Archives
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    That's a good beginning on this world. It's creepy, just right for 'Haunted Mansion'.
    Post by: Petor, Oct 30, 2008 in forum: Archives