Well basically, but it is like the sound files do not exist! Not only that but no matter what I do I can't find the stupid files. I was wondering if there is any site that can help me get back the sound files or something???
Riku came to the Market Street within Twilight Town, though no one was there. Riku didn't linger though, knowing that he needed answers. He'd go to Central Station to check for anyone next he figured. He began to walk once more, but, he couldn't help the sense something wasn't right... Riku figured he'd just have to keep his guard up. He walked casually regardless, but, he was listening carefully as he went into a alley way in Twilight Town.
That really sucks, I am so sorry =< I'm sure your dog feels that he could have been in no other loving home. After all with life comes death and it can be hard to handle, my grandpa died some time ago and I feel like a part of me is missing, but, time heals things. There's no need to cry, best thing to do is try and make the dog as happy as he can be before it's time...
A Mary Sue is a another meaning for 'little miss perfect' that means, they normally have the following listed
1) Have a emo past usually...
2) More then one man is in love with them... Via have perfect looks and are 'hot' as people would say.
3) They are unbeatable making them over powered and unfair = bad story because you know how everything will turn out!
4) Mostly everyone hates them!!! >_<
I didn't read your first post because I am skimming in boredom, as a fan-fic person myself I hope you are ready to understand you will have people crit. you, and admire you <3... I had a account (2 accounts) on fanfic net but lost them both like a fool =_=; I could help you, but I really, really am not sure with my knowledge on FF7 completely the only thing I thought was epic from it was Professor Hojo because if I was his age I'd date him... =X
Okay, that was not need to be said and please act like I said nothing about Hojo... Any who private mail me and I can help you there because I am not comfortable speaking here when it comes down to it. =/ Thank you for reading everything if you have done so.
PS
This should have been in the Literacy Forums I believe, but since no one looks there much... I understand why you posted it here. :xp: and no I am not trying to hurt your feelings if that is how you look at it =< I just wanted a say because this looked better then other forums I skimmed through. Also some people don't know about what you call a AU Story... I hope you've hear of it becuase from what I see on your comments that is what seems to be what your story is (Alt. Univewrse meaning it doesn't FULLY go by the true story of a book/game. But has the same characters and such...) You always wanna tell people that otherwise you get angry FF7 fans would will gut you Zexion's Wife lady. So be careful were you post and what you say ^_^; )
Marluxia was on the world of Wonderland, minding his own business. He was figuring out which would seem easiest to take over with low profile. After all they were becoming noticed and he had to think fast if he wanted to make his goal work... He listened as the queen of hearts yell and scream as normal. It seemed like the world really was in need of a better leader. The other worlds most likely needed the very same thing. Marluxia looked to his scythe in his hand, should he start or should he tell the rest of his followers first... It seemed like a simple answer, if his followers thought low of him, they'd betray him. He shut his eyes without a speck of emotion showing...
Riku yawned softly under his breath, he was in Twilight Town. The reason why was to do the obvious, search for answers of were the people in org. coats have been seen and what they're plans are now... Riku figured what ever they planned, it was going to cause trouble. That's what happened with organization XIII, right? Riku walked around looking for someone to question about this matter.
Aye I never heard of Draken: The Ancients Gate, perhaps I should look into it.
It's hard to pick a favorite character to be honest...
I might have to agree on Lord Caim :=D: that is for sure, to bad he only had one line to say in the whole game =P (before the lose of his voice)
Arioch as a character was very well planned, it wasn't just a plain/boring character.
Then again I find that Squire-Enix is very talented with making characters most of the time.
To bad you didn't get to play Drakengard 2, Though new main character, a few past characters reappear.
New thing mainly was you could hold some items and more to the plot after 18 years after the first...
Encase you plan to ever play I won't spoil any further of that.
No, not Latin... It is a small country once a part of Russia, if you look on a map it should be west of Russia... I just can't spell it >_<; But thanks for your tip, I'll try to keep Rosetta Stone in mind =3