I Become Dull {Day by Day}

Lucideffective: Thank you for sharing your opinion of the video. I respect your point of view completely but, personally, I'm rather proud of this video and wouldn't change a thing ^_^ I agree with you about the overlay effects, they do get a bit repetative (Blame it on my lack of overlays) but, as for the heart monitor and the translation, I personally don't see anything wrong with them. The heart monitor, I did try to match it with the beat of the song and I think it does fit (again, if you think it doesn't, that's absolutely fine) and the text, I think is rather well translated (and I tried to adjust it so that it made more sense in English) and I don't feel that it covers up the video too much.
Once again, I respect and appreciate your input, and if this isn't really your kind of video, that's fine by me ^_^

*here, I can't believe I made that mistake, talk about poor English.

The text doesn't really add anything to the song - especially as the translation tends to have terrible grammar. There seems to be a great video hear that is being covered up needlessly, with the overlaid effects that are rotating with every clip, the heartbeat meter - which I might have forgiven if the colour matched what it is overlaying or it matched the beat of the song. I'd really love to see what this video would look like sans effects - I think I'd enjoy it a lot more.