To Jalen/Soku

Discussion in 'Archives' started by KnightReaper, Jun 4, 2008.

  1. KnightReaper Traverse Town Homebody

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    I worked on this all day and night yesterday until I finally was done with this.

    Sitting sadly on my bed
    Listening to the wild winds blow,
    Crying bitterly behind my hair
    Trying not to let it show.

    Knowing that you won't be back
    You left without good-bye's,
    Never to mend my broken heart
    Letting loose my cries.

    Everyday I waited
    And everyday I prayed,
    Hoping God would leave you here
    At least just one more day.

    He was such a great friend for the little remainder that I knew him as and I wish I could've seen him one more time.
     
  2. Catch the Rain As the world falls down ♥

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    Dude that's awesome, I love the flow of it and you have a great style which I have admired in your other work too.

    Jalen would have liked it a lot I think :3
     
  3. KnightReaper Traverse Town Homebody

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    Thanks.

    I felt that he was a good person to me whenever I talked to him. He never pointed out any flaws. He kept trying to be that protective, yet funny brother.