Traditional Art This is y I suck...

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by Hakurei Reimu, Sep 19, 2009.

  1. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    Axel and Roxas pictures could have been better but all that's really wrong with either is the body mechanics. So overall this isn't bad and I actually like the perspective on the Xion pic. One thing though, I'm not really getting what you mean by distorted. Could you specify what you mean for me please?
     
  3. bobo.the.nut Traverse Town Homebody

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    Personally, only Roxas' body looks "distorted", and that's just because he looks too skinny... and his pants are sorta uneven. :| So, yeah, what exactly is it you don't like about it?
    Good idea though, and cool perspective in Xion's photo. I approve.
     
  4. Hakurei Reimu Take my hand. And then I'll fly with you right up

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    If it came out like I wanted to, there would b no problems with bodies and the everything would b much more detailed...

    ...but if I did that, I'd have to spend more time...which is something I don really have rite now...
     
  5. Juicy Chaser

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    This is actually a really cute and sweet piece of work c: a refreshing idea, too. It's good for digital art imo anyway. I agree you could have worked on Roxas' body a bit but adding too much detail to this would have ruined its cute style.