The Silver Lining

The silver lining
The glimmer of hope in the clouds
The faces of those smiling and crying
The voices of those quiet and loud

Your hand reaches through
Your laughter rich with tenderness
Your breath refreshing and cool
Your words, full of bliss

My heart begins to thrums
My entire minds starts to tingle
My deep hatred slowly growing numb
My lingering anger becoming cold

The silver lining
The glimmer of hope in the clouds
The faces of those cheering and groaning
The voices of those before and now...

The silver lining...

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Just a poem I wrote for a friend who has gone through a bad bug experience...it's not one of my best since I never do well with rhyming, but I hope you like it anyway. XD​

 

I really like it. Good job.

 

Thanks, I'm glad you do. :)

 

XP i'm sure who it was who had the experience is really touched it's awesome

 

Thanks! :) And I'm sure *cough*you*cough* - he, liked it. XD

 

But yea it was an awesome poem

 

LOL yea i bet he loved it i mean who wouldn't be touched knowing that someone cares that a bug crawled in their ear and ate them inside *COUGH* me *COUGH*

 

*looks at Twilight_Falls* O_o

 

.... what i'm just saying its an awesome poem 5 stars Nymph

 

lol Thanks, both of you. :) :glomp:

 

Yes 5 stars plus 2 thumbs and 1,000 cookies *gives cookies*

 

Nymph.

I love this poem. Hell, I love all your poems.

I really should get to typing and posting some of my own becuase I write them at school all the time.


Great job on this one!
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I loved your poem nymph, silver lining that is a fantastic title for it!:)

 

Short, but still good ^^.

 

Good length.....pretty good rhyme.....atmosphere....kind of confused on it lol....seems like it starts out happy but then turns somewhat gloomy....but over all good poem.....

 

lol Thanks everyone. :) And you really ought to post your poems, Orange~!

 

You're welcome.
I'll get around to doing it sometime. Maybe monday. My notebook is at school so I can't do it tonight or tomorrow.

But lol I've noticed you're already forgetting to indent, Nymph.
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Awesome! Can't wait to read them! XD

And yeah, it's new, so I keep forgetting. lol​