Digital Art Take them shoes off ya' teeth and stop runnin' your mouth.

Discussion in 'Arts & Graphics' started by SplitOverload, Jul 18, 2008.

  1. SplitOverload Chaser

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    New. A bit of a taste. How's it?

    Two c4ds I'm guessing. Or fractals, I forgot. Ask if you want.

    Comments plzz gaiz?
     
  2. on mirrors edge Traverse Town Homebody

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    i like it for the most part.....the green contrasts the red nicely......

    although there is one bit i dont like, the far right is just black, i feel that should be....A) removed, or B) filled in....

    other than that, great job
     
  3. Inasuma "pumpkin"

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    Make it a gray-ish color, the text.

    Otherwise could use more light. ;o
     
  4. GhettoXemnas literally dead inside

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    I agree with darkeh D:
     
  5. Xidon Traverse Town Homebody

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    It is a generally bad idea to use a highly decorated text in a pure color, because it messes up the flow and the focal point, you should make a clipping mask out of the letter if your eager to keep it...
     
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    I like your tag, really emphasises its neatness ^^

    I think its awesome, but you need to add a bit more color.
     
  7. SplitOverload Chaser

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    Thanks guys. I thought it was hot for the colors. I have used white detailed fonts several times, but I decided that having this one in a different color might ruin the amount of color I already set on it. Go overdose on the colors = no good?

    alright thanks. I'll take the critique to consideration.
     
  8. Cody Chaser

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    Fix lighting.
    Fix conratst.
    Make it b/w.
    And it's decent.