Promise

Alright FAW finally comvinced me to post one of my poems. So here it is. I got the idea from Kingdom Hearts.

Promise​

I stare into the dark night sky
wishing I had wings to help me fly
Then I'd be able totouch those distant stars
And bring them back to share with you
But even if I could I couldn't
Cause you left right after you promised you wouldn't
You left without a note or even a good-bye
You just left me here alone to cry
So now I wait alone on this isle
With my heart filled with pain and worry for you
Now as look back those diamonds in the sky
I remember that you'll come back to me some day
And that you'll still be mine
Cause that's what you said when we'd last spoken
This reassures me that your promise wasn't broken. ​

 

That made water come out my eyes....

 

*gives Jack a tissue*
Thankies! :o :D

 

I thought it was beautiful. Please keep posting your poems, no matter what anybody says. Also your poem reminded me of love. So keep posting!!!!!!:) :)

 

Thankies E-chan! :D :D

 

wow, that was awesome. *claps frantically* i didnt know my wife was such a master of words. i cant wait to hear more ^_^