Traditional Art my untitled drawing

http://www.kh-vids.net/picture.php?albumid=813&pictureid=9134 I made this weeks after school was out...I gave it to my friend...I like this one though. What do you people think (and yes the writing on the drawing is my handwriting)

 

The eye seems alittle too bigg, and the legs a little too skinny, but everthing else looks good.

 

I tried looking at amanga to see how big the eyes should be when I was drawing the picture...it was hard to tell heh heh..also from my point of veiw I thought the legs looked okay (though that's just me)

 

Try working on the proportioning of the head a bit more, then they eye won't look so weird. The legs a a tad bit too skinny and I can't believe I am pointing this out but her chest looks a bit saggy but I think that's because the body is a bit short.

 

I don't notice a lot of things about my drawings I'm still a beginner (if I make my own character there are some mistakes but if I draw a character from a tv show there i rarely any mistakes).. anyway I'm not used to drawing a full body character that's all I'm still looking at some books about drwaing anime and manga and stuff like that

 

Adorable drawing, but the first thing I noticed was...your cursive capital 'E' is backwards...I don't even write in print so it really stood out to me...sorry...​

 

I <3 the eye, it's just a little too big. The ear on her left side seems a little too big aswell. Work on the smoothness of your handwriting. Apart from that, it actually looks okay :'D

 

Try using real people as a reference for drawing your manga. It really will help you improve. Trust me, it will, it helped me a lot when I started drawing manga a few years ago.

 

I haven't wrote in cursive for a long time......also my friend always seems to point that whoever I draw their ears seem to be a bit like they are swelled up or something I try do draw them less like that but I can tell it's not working to well....that's usually why when ever id raw girls I try to cover up the ears

 

It's a good picture. I wish I could actually draw and not epically fail...