This looks rather hawt. :3 First of all, blend Mr. Sparrow in. He looks a little slapped in. And maybe it's just me, but he looks like he was resized in funky ways as well. Text is okay, but I think you should either make it curve around with a circle and disappear behind Jack or on that line that slashes across. Background looks very nice. Add a drop shadow behind the circle things. nice job for "just screwing around".
