.......... Uh.... Hi.... *looks around strangely* I just the family, so, uh... O.O *cough* Sup...?
Wow.... @-@ I like the coloor you used for the words, especially. =3 Vurry nice, joo. =3
NEXT TIME I WILL NOT DISAPPOINT YOU, RIKU FANGURLS!!! >O I'm making plans, but nothing solid for now... I already have... *counts on fingers* 3 fanfictions I have to get done with. X.x; But this one will DEFINATELY be making another appearance. >3 Just wait... PATIENCE IS A VIRTUE!!1!111 >=O *can't spell worth crap today XD* Anime Grillz: I though Demyx was actually kinda challenging... I beat him on the first try, but it was hard, and every other time I tried to beat him for fun, I lost. XD;
HEY! >=O MY BRICK!!!! >O *gets hit with a brick* *huge knot appears on head* AND DON'T YOU FORGET IT!!! x.X *hit with a barrage of bricks*
Band! Science! P.E.! (except when we have the stupid mile run... >.>;) History = the death of me. X.x Along with English (the grammar section always tears me to shreads. X.x)
=O In my stories, too! Great minds think alike, I always say... XD;
I can't see it!!!! DX Do you have it on another site? My parental controls are spazzing out again... >.>;
“I think that-” he started, but right now she wasn’t in the mood to hear what he had to say. She lifted one of her hands straight up, and then brought it sharply back down. As she did, an enormous bolt of lighting came down from the sky and struck Roxas, knocking him nearly 10 yards from where he was standing. xDDDDDDDDD I'm so glad you didn't pick Demyx. =3 Demyx is MY punching bag. >.> XD Jokin'. =3 Great, as always. =3
Suddenly, Larxene appeared behing him and shouted :"BOO!!!" but Axel didn't even flinched. That should be "flinch." =P He asked:" What brings you here?". I noticed this with some of your sentances - you put a period AFTER the quotes, even if there's a question mark or something before it. You don't need to do that. XD; If it comes out like, He asked, "What brings you here?" that, it's fine. =P Oh, and a comma (,) comes before quotes - not a colon. (:) That's it. =3 Keep it up.
For me, there's only 2 problems. You need just a bit more description so that it doesn't sound rushed. Make a new paragraph everytime someone else speaks. This way it's easier to tell the characters apart. That's it. =3 Keep it up! ^-^
XDDDDDDDDD Noooooo...... =3 Thanks for the complement, Darky. =3
Joo know joo like it! >D *smacked with a brick*
:D LOVED IT! XDDDD DO PRIDE LANDS!! Do Pride Lands next! =D I was gonna make some kinda random fanfic about that, but I've got too much on my hands right now, so I wanna see YOU do it! :D GO FOR IT, DOODE!!! XDDDD
=3 *flashes you a thumbs up* Great goin' lassy! XD
Oh yeah - I forgot to mention... You can also tell that Lexah = killed by Larxene and Rexon = killed by Xaldin when they greet everybody. XD They purposely leave out those names. =3 Thanks for liking! ^-^
Yuo're awsome! XD I wish I had as many fans as you! XDDD *hit with a brick* X.x
"OH WHEN I DROP A FLOWER BOY, YOU KNOW I'M ONLY GETTING STARTED MO****-******S!!!!" XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD Hilarious!!!!!! XDDDDDD
.... *says it aloud* Holy shiisaa! O.o You're right! O.O Anyways... Thanks for liking. XD;
XDDDDDD This actually happened to me once... >.>; At first I was gonna do it to Vexen, since he has that long hair, but I decided, "Hey, he's gonna lose anyway...!" and targeted Xaldin. XD Ebil, no? >3
(Part 3)If Organization XIII Used AIM... PART 3 IS HERE!!!!! Phew... busy day... ^-^' Sorry if it's a little brief sounding... ^-^' The randomness can and WILL make your brain melt inside of your head. Just a warning. >.>' Here's the first one... 2Foxxie4U's Irrelevant \ Sleep Deprived Productions~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 16Massacrer2Bee has joined the room LeadNobody#1: Oh my god… BobMarley#3: Is that…? Flower_Man11: It is…! O.O Tomahawk_Mann5: … lexah? 15WarriorFo’eSho has joined the room 15WarriorFo’eSho: Sup guys? 16Massacrer2Bee: Did you miss us? FireFox888: And now REXON?! BobMarley#3: *Dr. Pepper shoots out of nose* 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: This is way too weird. >.>; 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Well, THAT’S a nice image, Xaldin. >.>; SeniorMember444: Two Nobodies with the ability to come back to life?! Forget the omelet girl! THIS is an experiment TRULY worthy of my expertise! >D Flower_Man11: Expertise? You wish. XD SeniorMember444: >.> Water_Boi999: I see dead people…! Water_Boi999: I mean… Uh… Water_Boi999: Nobodies! =O 12Psychotik4Life: Now I’m confused, and that doesn’t happen often. 2FreeshootinPirate2: They have AIM in the afterlife…? O.o; Water_Boi999: They do? SHWEET! >D FireFox888: Is AIM all you think about now? Water_Boi999: >.> Water_Boi999: <.< Water_Boi999: No… 2FreeshootinPirate2: As if. >.>; 15WarriorFo’eSho: Hey, Xemnas, Xigbar, Vexen, Lex, Zexion, Saix, Axel, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, and Larxene. 16Massacrer2Bee: Hey, Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lex, Zexion, Saix, Axel, Demyx, Luxord, and Marluxia. LeadNobody#1: Number XV and XVI! How did you…? LeadNobody#1: I mean… Xaldin and Larxene… They… LeadNobody#1: You know… LeadNobody#1: KILLED you, correct…? O.o BobMarley#3: … BobMarley#3: On accident. might I add? O.o; 12Psychotik4Life: Whatever. You totally had it comin’ for ya, Lexah. >.> 16Massacrer2Bee: Still as psychotic as I remember. BobMarley#3: … BobMarley#3: It was an ACCIDENT! DX LeadNobody#1: Excuse me, but I was first. >.> LeadNobody#1: The question remains the same. How can you talk to us? Water_Boi999: They’re not talking to us, Xemmy. AIM, remember? LeadNobody#1: I am well aware of that, Number IX. >.> 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: … *is thinking* 16Massacrer2Bee: Oh, this? Varstix hooked us up. LeadNobody#1: NUMBER XVIII?! ArtistikWitch411 has joined the room Flower_Man11: NAMINE! >O LeadNobody#1: This is YOUR doing, isn’t it, witch?! ArtistikWitch411: Don’t look at me… ArtistikWitch411: I don’t even know what’s going on… O.o; 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: … Hey, yeah! A PAIR of panties!? LeadNobody#1: ?! BobMarley#3: ?! Flower_Man11: ?! Tomahawk_Mann5: ?! 15WarriorFo’eSho: ?! 16Massacrer2Bee: ?! FireFox888: ?! 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: ?! SeniorMember444: ?! 2FreeshootinPirate2: ?! Water_Boi999: ?! ArtistikWitch411: ?! DarksideoftheMoon77: ?! 12Psychotik4Life: ?! 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: I was just thinking… Why do we call it a pair if it’s only one… Well… pair? DarksideoftheMoon77: … Well… That’s certainly out of the blue! O.o; 12Psychotik4Life: Your idiocy never fails to astound me, Luxord. 16Massacrer2Bee: Maybe it’s because you have 2 holes for your legs or something…? 2FreeshootinPirate2: Well… A double barreled shot-gun’s got 2 barrels… 2FreeshootinPirate2: But we don’t go around saying “A pair of guns.†1Gamblin_Gangsta0: Panties… Guns… 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: Is there some kinda connection? ArtistikWitch411 has left the room LeadNobody#1: That’s enough out of you, Number X! >.<; 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: Sowwy… 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Marluxia, can I go now? Flower_Man11: No. 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Damn. >.< 16Massacrer2Bee: Hey look. We’re almost complete! BobMarley#3: Dead Members and all… XD; 15WarriorFo’eSho: I miss the old Organization XVIII… You know… Before you, Larxene, and Saix started going all crazy and killing everyone in sight. >.> BobMarley#3: IT WAS AN ACCIDENT! DX 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: Hey, now that I think about it, where’s Roxas? 16Massacrer2Bee: Oh, him? He’s still taking his friend to the hospital. Flower_Man11: What the… Do you dead guys keep tabs on us 24\7? 16Massacrer2Bee: We sure do. =) LeadNobody#1: … That’s disturbing. DarksideoftheMoon77: Agreed. 2FreeshootinPirate2: Hey… I just thought about something… 2FreeshootinPirate2: You wanna hear a word that sounds really perverted, but isn’t? FireFox888: How about “No� >.> 2FreeshootinPirate2: “Cocktail.†Water_Boi999: … Water_Boi999: Oh, I get it. XD Water_Boi999: How about “Uranus� =3 2FreeshootinPirate2: Nah, that’s way too overused. 2FreeshootinPirate2: I mean something like… 2FreeshootinPirate2: Like… 15WarriorFo’eSho: “Pussycat� 2FreeshootinPirate2: Yeah! That! XD BobMarley#3: How about “Shebang� >3 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Or “Barrel roll� 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: What the… That doesn’t sound perverted…! O.o; 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: It is where I come from… 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: O.o;;;;;;;; FireFox888: Well, how about “Mansex� =3 LeadNobody#1: And THAT is where I draw the line. >.> LeadNobody#1: Cut it out. LeadNobody#1: Now. 2FreeshootinPirate2: Aw… Come on, Mansex…! Don’t be like that! =3 LeadNobody#1: I wouldn’t be talking, BIGRAX. DarksideoftheMoon77: OOOOOH!!! DarksideoftheMoon77: Dissed by da Superior! >D 2FreeshootinPirate2: … 2FreeshootinPirate2: Buttkisser. >.> DarksideoftheMoon77: That’s it. I’m comin’ over there. 2FreeshootinPirate2: NO, WAIT! Saix, I was just kidding! DarksideoftheMoon77 has left the room 2FreeshootinPirate2: Guys, I have to go hide under my bed now and hope that I’ll make it through the rest of the day alive. Bye. ;_; 12Psychotik4Life: Good luck with that. 2FreeshootinPirate2 has left the room Water_Boi999: XD Poor Xiggy. =3 Water_Boi999: He should know better than to mess around with Saix like that. 15WarriorFo’eSho: Yeah, you’d think he’d learn his lesson by now… XD; Water_Boi999: Yeah, I know! Why, just the other day, I – OH MY GAWD, CERBERUS!!! Water_Boi999 has left the room FireFox888: Sounds like trouble… O.o; 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Yeah… I should… Ya know… go check on him. >.> Flower_Man11: Yeah, right! You wouldn’t go check on him! You’re just using this as an excuse to go. >.< Flower_Man11: You’re staying. Period. Flower_Man11: Remember, Zexxy… I can turn your bedroom into a pink, fluffy forest of LUUUUUUUV!~ 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Alright, alright, I’LL STAY! Damn… >.>; 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: Well, if Xiggy’s gone, I might as well go. 1Gamblin_Gangsta0: See ya laterz. 1Gamblin_Gangsta0 has left the room 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: … 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: He did that just to make me mad… >.>; 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: I know he did. FireFox888: Okay, let’s see who’s left… FireFox888: Me, Xemnas, Larxene, Marluxia, Zexion, Rexon, Lexah, Xaldin, Vexen, and Lexaeus. Tomahawk_Mann5: how come im always last >.> 12Psychotik4Life: Grammar. 12Psychotik4Life: Continue, Axel. FireFox888: Well, Lex… You don’t really talk much… FireFox888: Come to think of it, neither do you, Vexen. SeniorMember444: That is because I am busy… BobMarley#3: Riiiiight… SeniorMember444: HEY! Respect your elders! >.< 15WarriorFo’eSho: Actually, you can take me and Lexah out of the list. J-Man wants to speak with us. 16Massacrer2Bee: See ya later! ^-^ Go to hell, Larxene! ^-^ 16Massacrer2Bee has left the room 15WarriorFo’eSho has left the room 12Psychotik4Life: >.> She’s lucky she’s already dead… BobMarley#3: J-Man…? FireFox888: Surely, they don’t mean…? O.o; Flower_Man11: … Flower_Man11: Zexion… I’ve got some advice for you. Flower_Man11: Burn the dirty magazines. Flower_Man11: Now. 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: I’ll be happy to. Flower_Man11: No, not NOW, you idiot! DX 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Damn… >.> I wanted to go… 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: I’m not saying anything else until you let me leave, Marluxia. >.> *PinkHairedGal* has joined the room 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: It’s her! O.O Flower_Man11: Um… I never said you could leave, man. XD; 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: >.>; FireFox888: HOLY FLAMING TAMPONS, BATMAN!!! =O 12Psychotik4Life: Axel, shut up before I come over there and knock you senseless. *PinkHairedGal*: I’m gonna choose to ignore that… >.>; Papu_Boy911 has joined the room 12Psychotik4Life: JESUS! Him, too?! >.> Papu_Boy911: Hey, Kairi-Baby! Papu_Boy911: …And Organization Members. LeadNobody#1: Oh yes, you’re just so superior; we were barely noticeable, even though there are, let’s see, 8 of us? Papu_Boy911: You took the words right out of my mouth. =3 Tomahawk_Mann5: now that i think about it that’s kinda weird to picture… 12Psychotik4Life: GRAMMAR! 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: It’s a figure of speech, you dope. >.> Tomahawk_Mann5: I know… 12Psychotik4Life: That’s a lot better. >.> *PinkHairedGal*: Hey, mah Sugar-Sora. =3 12Psychotik4Life: UGH! Spare me the love talk. xP 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: I’ll second that. FireFox888: Hey, Kairi… *PinkHairedGal*: What is it? >.> FireFox888: Wanna go out with me sometime? Papu_Boy911: WTF?!?!?! *PinkHairedGal*: Uh… No… O.o Papu_Boy911: That is OFF LIMITS, man! >O FireFox888: Can’t blame a guy for trying… Papu_Boy911: I can PUNCH a guy for trying… >.> SeniorMember444: Hmmm… Lexaeus. Let’s go. I’ve just thought up a great experiment, but I need your help. SeniorMember444: … SeniorMember444: And your blood. SeniorMember444: Don’t worry. This time it’ll only be a FEW cups. SeniorMember444 has left the room Tomahawk_Mann5: … Tomahawk_Mann5: God help me… ._.; Tomahawk_Mann5 has left the room BobMarley#3: I’d better go, too. Gotta make sure that Vexen doesn’t do any serious damage… >.> LeadNobody#1: I shall accompany you. >.>; LeadNobody#1 has left the room BobMarley#3 has left the room *PinkHairedGal*: Sora, when are you coming back from the Pride Lands? Papu_Boy911: I’m coming back now. *PinkHairedGal*: I’ll wait for you in King Triton’s Throne Room. ^-^ Papu_Boy911 has left the room *PinkHairedGal*: Oh, and, Axel? I wouldn’t go out with you if you paid me. >P *PinkHairedGal*: Got it memorized? *PinkHairedGal* has left the room FireFox888: She used my catchphrase AGAIN! >.> Flower_Man11: I smell a cat-fight brewing. >3 FireFox888: Oh, shut UP, Marly… Flower_Man11: Hey, wait… How could Sora type if he was in the Pride Lands? Flower_Man11: Don’t lions have paws? O.o; 12Psychotik4Life: No one will ever know… FireFox888: … FireFox888 has left the room 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: You know what, Marly? I don’t care anymore. I’m not wasting any more of MY life in this stupid chat room when I could be doing more important stuff. Flower_Man11: Like looking at pr0n? >3 12Psychotik4Life: pwnt XD 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: >.> 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: Turn my room as pink as your scythe for all I care. 6Depressed_Not_Emo6: I’m out. 6Depressed_Not_Emo6 has left the room Flower_Man11: … Flower_Man11: Well, it looks like it’s just you and me, now, Larxene… 12Psychotik4Life: Nope – just you. I need to go, too. Flower_Man11: Damn… I guess I’ll just sabotage Zexion’s room now… >.>; 12Psychotik4Life has left the room Flower_Man11 has left the room A few seconds later… *ZeKeybladeMaster13* has joined the room *ZeKeybladeMaster13*: ... hello? *ZeKeybladeMaster13*: … *ZeKeybladeMaster13* has left the room The end! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry, Anime Grillz. No KingdomKid for you. >3 I'd already decided on his name by then. "QUICK, PAPU BOY, to the Riku Mobile! <insert cheezy Batman music here>" I'm not sure whether or not to continue this later... It's been so fun! XD I'm not sure if I can give it up just yet... Maybe if you guys asked nicely, I'll do more with it... (including having Riku make his glorious appearance, since I forgot all about him in this one! XD; ) Comments appriciated!!! =D Lord of the Wings, ~Leah. Here's part 4!!! Now, Anime Grillz, LEAVE ME DA F(honk) ALONE!!!! XDDDDDD