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That's basically what I said. D:

I'll join!

But making a whole AMV with just the three Knights might be tough. D:

I hope she dies,but it isn't in the way Aerith did (my own character in my own game will share a similar fate,though. >:3 )

She might become overpowered with the Heartless,and maybe fall unconsious. And as for the Disney-oriented part of dying,you seem to be forgetting how Vexen died,or what happened.

Axel shot one of his.....thingys (I forget the name. xD) into Vexen,and with a snap of his fingers Vexen went A-Sloded.

Sora swore,which is so not Disney (except in Pirates of the Caribbean). Remember?

'W-What...What the Hell is WRONG with you people?!'

Then Axel says 'Give me one Hell of a show!' later on,after Namine leaves to save Sora.

See? Not all that Disney-oriented. Or kid-friendly. xD

I absolutely hate Kairi.She would never be in my party.

Truthfully,she isn't even a real Keyblade weilder.Riku just gave it to her because he (and I so agree with this) thought it was about time she started to save her own ***.

Kairi's not gonna be in my party. >.>

I meant in the first KH, Sora and Roxas look nothing alike. In KH II,they look alike for their face and eyes. Read. >.>

It's not just the color for Xemnas and Ansem (I said Ansem. >> ).Their shape is the same,and their skin tone is very much alike.

And yes,I discovered that Ven and Roxas are identical just yesterday. If you were talking about Ven's and Roxas's hair,for the 'bit shorter and a bit lighter',thing,you're forgetting something.

Ven only appeared in the Secret Ending,where the quality and graphics were awesome. Roxas was mostly just in the actual game,where the graphics weren't as good. Therefore the color and size would be altered a bit.

I agree. Plus the whole 'chop the X in half and you get the V' thing doesn't exactly work. >.>

Whoa. I feel special. 8D

Haha,thanks! It really hurt my brain,though. x.x

Ahh,that's true. I don't have any of the FM+'s,so I didn't remember that. xD

Yes,but even then,Sora looked nothing like Roxas. Look.





See?

I agree that the armor is probably their only clothes,since they appear to be protecting Kingdom Hearts.

But,if they did have regular clothes,I'd say something along the lines of this:

Terra- Terra would probably be wearing a sort of scarf/cape thing,like Cloud in KH I or Vincent in FF VII:AC. He would probably be wearing boots,slightly torn but also slightly baggy. His shirt would probably be tight,and look somewhat like FF VII:AC's Cloud's. I can imagine that he would also probably have kick-*** black leather gloves. x3

Aqua-I can imagine her wearing a sort of vanilla-colored armings,one leather glove,short shorts,thick leggings,a pair of those majorly-freako KH shoes,and a top that's sort of like a tube-top,but slightly torn at the bottom and there's thin,black straps that tie around the back of her neck. I can also imagine her wearing some of those pilot/worker goggles at the top of her head.

Ven- Definately seems like a layers guy. Well,duh.He looks exactly like Roxas. Anyway,definately some of those large-o shoes.With zippers. 8D His long-sleeved shirt,which is under his black-tank top,would be dark green with black stripes. As for his pants,they would probably be baggy,cover-most-of-the-feet,dark green camo pants.

Yeah. That so rocks. Will prolly draw a picture to show what I mean. x3

Why,thank you Moodkip. ^-^

I have also just brought up another thing:

Why was Roxas able to weild the Keyblade?

Yes,yes,we all know he was Sora's Nobody.But the Keyblade goes to one with one of the strongest Hearts.

Roxas doesn't have a Heart. It might be Ven's side of Roxas that is still able to weild it.

I also have just taken three screen shots of said scene in my last post. Doesn't Ven look familiar?



Oh,but look at it upside down.




Look closely at the style of hair.




That's Ven,now look at Roxas's hair.





See? The EXACT SAME PERSON.

And if you look at the second screen shot,compare Ven's body to Aquas. He is incrediblly short compared to her. He is the youngest. And he was about to be the first to attack Shiney if Terra hadn't stopped him. That's Roxas for you.

Anything else one would like to know?

EDIT

God,I hate it when I do this. I suddenly realize things AFTER I say something else.

In Kingdom Hearts I, we all know that Riku was supposed to be the Keyblade weilder. But then it went to Sora after Riku was taken over by the Darkness.

Why Sora?

True,Sora had a strong Heart.But he was so young. It probably went because of the Ven inside of Sora's Heart,but it was drawn to Riku's own Heart at first.

In the semi-intro of KH II, we see two cloaked figures on a dead,deserted land. The taller one says

'I've been to see him. He looks a lot like you.'

At first,we all assume that he is talking about Sora. I know I did.

But when I really think about it...as far as I know,Xemnas has never met Sora before Hollow Bastion. So why would he be talking about him?

He was most likely meaning Ven. Look at the similarities. Whereas Sora and Roxas,to me personally,look almost nothing alike. True,the eyes and face were quite similar,but the hair bothered me. It made way to much of a difference.


So I still stand, Roxas is a reincarnation of Ven. Ven's spirit was probably recycled into the body and Heart of another (probably into the Heart of Sora,before he was born) because he was so young and so pure. So yes.

zOMG. Haven't done anything for this in a while,huh? xD

Hehe. I just made a new avvie last night! It rocks lyke whoa!



Tis an awesome avvie,and I loves it very much. BTW, it says '{[DIVE]}: Into the *Heart~',in case you couldn't read it.

Enjoy!

No relation to my name, huh?

lol. Nice. :3

How To Begin a Story

Zandyne did a wonderful job of explaining what goes in a story. Kudos to them.

:3

Jade Rhade, as well, did a great job in representing how multiple languages,semicolons,and conjunctions should be used and where.

I'm going to teach you how to start to begin thinking of your story, and how to write it correctly, without overdoing your brain.

STEP ONE: First think of a plot, setting, and the main characters.
EXAMPLE:Plot- Sora's life is pretty boring, until a new kid named Roxas comes to his school. He begins to have homosexual thoughts about him, but doesn't understand what he's feeling.

See? Like that.

STEP TWO: Think about minor characters, meaning the characters that aren't as important as the main characters, but are still there to make the story come alive.
EXAMPLE:Main Characters- Sora, Roxas
Minor characters- Kairi, teacher, Riku, etc....

STEP THREE: (be sure to be writing this all down somewhere) Think of how both the main and the minor characters are going to be fitting into the plot.
EXAMPLE:Sora(MAIN)- Bored boy who meets Roxas
Roxas(MAIN)-New kid who meets Sora,and has same thoughts about him.
Kairi(MINOR)-Friend of Sora who tries to steal Roxas,but fails.....miserably. (x3)
ETC...

STEP FOUR: Think of some of the dialogue that all of the characters are going to say.
EXAMPLE:"What is it, Kairi?" Sora asked. His tone and facial expression appeared to be that of an extremely annoyed youth.

"Y'know that new kid, Roxas? He's pretty cute." Kairi said. Sora replied with a slow nod.

YOU GOTTA MAKE IT SOUND LIKE A HUMAN,AND NOT A ROBOT, IS SPEAKING. (<-- CAPs for it to being noticed.Is important. :3)

STEP FIVE: Be yourself. Imagine you in your character's shoes. What would you say or do?
EXAMPLE:Oh, and P.S.....

"'I LIKE YOUR HOT BOD'?!" Sora exclaimed with shock, and rage. Though mostly shock.
(I know I would react like that. >.>;; )

STEP SIX*MOST IMPORTANT*: Although this is optional to do, I do this: THINK Of SOME PLOTS OR STORIES AHEAD. Whenever I am RolePlaying, sometimes I think of a plot that comes out of the blue while I am supposed to be sleeping (haha). I have to wait a few days to put that plan into action, but it works. And sometimes keeps the RolePlay going for some time longer without us having writer's block or being bored. It's the same with story writing. If you think of a plot or a twist ahead of time, it keeps the reader's guessing, and keeps their attention on the story. Don't make it too complicated,though, because it could confuse both the readers and you.
EXAMPLE:Yes! He replied! He is so gonna make Sora jealous. And then the two will fight over me. Kairi's thoughts squealed with joy and excitement. Her slender fingers hastily snatched the paper from her locker, and quickly unfolded it. Her face changed. Her hopes dropped, and her anger rose. What this note said, she did not like.

Kairi-
Sorry. I'm in love with....someone else.

~Roxas.

STEP SEVEN: You are on your way to becoming a writer. Start outlining and experiementing with your story. If it's the way that you think both you and your readers will enjoy, then keep it up!

I hope this was helpfull. Not very good at explaining things.... x.x

Examples Used: 'The Coldest Heart' by- Just A Nobody.

:3

I sorry. I would've worked on it more if I hadn't had to go to school and cut it off. x.x

I know, like seriously. It's like me saying "I'M NOT A LESBIAN" before making out with a chick.

Okay, bad example. o.o;;

lolz. Thanks! I personally. don't see it as much, though. It's just kinda something I would do if I were in their place. I know I would freak out if I had homosexual thoughts about someone I knew.

At least, I think I would....

I have just noticed that part of Rule 3. And, I have a question:

What if you entered an entirely new story? It says that a new chapter won't let you win again. But what about a new story?

And, if you've won once, you can't win again.... Does that,again, go for the same story but more chapters?

Please help me. I'm a poor,confused little 14 year-old. :/

Ahh, thank you! 8D

I try to make it as comic and such as possible without killing off my brain. x.x

-cracks nuckles- Alright. Better get started,then. :3

Will We Ever End up Together?

"Hey, Sora!"

Sora turned around at the sound of a female voice, calling to him. It was a red-haired girl. Kairi. Sora sighed dismayfully, but Kairi didn't seem to notice.

Class had just ended. Now it was time for Lunch. Poor Roxas was so nervous in the previous classes, it was so cute to Sora to see him, with his eyes watery and twinkling like a lone star in the Dark, Night sky. Or his cheeks, which had become as bright and red as the Red Rose which Roxas's beauty was compared to. It was hands down. Roxas was much more beautiful. Especially when shy.

"What is it, Kairi?" Sora asked. His tone and facial expression appeared to be that of an extremely annoyed youth.

"Y'know that new kid, Roxas? He's pretty cute." Kairi said. Sora replied with a slow nod.

"Oh, what the heck am I saying? He's GORGEOUS! He is such a babe. And, no offense to you Sora, but he is definately in a running contest with you for the Best Looking Guy in school."

I don't want your opinion about mine or his looks. What do you want with him? And me?

As if reading his thoughts, Kairi continued.

"Anyway, I was wondering... Since, y'know, you two have all the same classes and all, could you give him this?" She asked. A slip of paper was on it.

The slip of paper was torn from a larger sheet of paper. On it were words written in glittery, pink ink. Pink. And glitter. Two of Sora's most hated things. That, and Heartless. And Nobodies. And the fact that he can never beat Riku at anything.

The words read as follows:
Roxas-
Kobon wa! My name is Kairi. You might not know me, but I will give you a hint. I am in your Physical Education class. I have red hair, blue eyes, and such a sexy figure. Yeah. Now you know who I am. I was wondering, if maybe you and I could get together sometime this weekend. Maybe catch a movie, or go to a game, or just hang out at my place. PLEASE,please,please,PLEASE respond with your answer on another note, and stick it in my locker. My locker number is Locker A201. Can't wait!
~Kairi *

Oh, and P.S.....

"'I LIKE YOUR HOT BOD'?!" Sora exclaimed with shock, and rage. Though mostly shock.

"Yeah. I mean, I want this guy to feel special. Not to mention, don't he and I just look so cute together?" she asked. Sora stared at her with a thoughtful look on his face. He was obviously picturing Roxas with Kairi. And, he obviously did not approve.

ICK. No, no way! He and I look way better together. Wait. What did I say?

"Yeah, you two look like a natural coupling." He said with sarcasm. Kairi squealed with joy, snatched the note back, and hurried off to Roxas's locker. Sora sighed again, before making it over to the cafeteria.

Great. I'm jealous. Sora thought as he entered the lunch line.

I'm totally jealous....

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Kairi, after much searching, had finally found Roxas's locker. She had found Roxas there, switching some school supplies with others.

"Oh, Roxas! It's a surprise to see you here!" Kairi said.

Crap, that sounded so stupid!

"Uhm, yeah. This is my locker. I go here to get things for my classes. Why wouldn't I be here?" Roxas asked. His eyebrow raised slightly.

What does this girl want with me?

"Uhm, yeah. Anyway...... This is for you." Kairi shoved the slip of paper into Roxas's hands. It become slightly folded, and very crumbled up. Then the girl hurried away.

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After lunch, Kairi rushed to her locker. There was a piece of paper sticking out of it.

Yes! He replied! He is so gonna make Sora jealous. And then the two will fight over me. Kairi's thoughts squealed with joy and excitement. Her slender fingers hastily snatched the paper from her locker, and quickly unfolded it. Her face changed. Her hopes dropped, and her anger rose. What this note said, she did not like.

Kairi-
Sorry. I'm in love with....someone else.

~Roxas.

-stretch- Ack. Another shortie. Bleh. Ahh well, I tried. :/

SQUEEEEEE

zOHMIGAWD

My story was story of the week?!?! 8D