Of course :'D hello
Hey misty c: I was Obsessed and Cariad for a while too :3 Woo :'D
Ikr instant approval for a fellow fan Currently immersed in a storm of swords
is this where llave turns out to be a bloke NOVA I remember you, hello :3 Yo Styx, Forsaken :'D
My sincerest apologies, mi'lady. I was also a sec mod in the days of old
Haiiii your username has thrown me off too Bonus points for being a Dany fan :'D Yo Fearless c:
now I feel kinda bad that I can't remember you :c ffffff why did I even bother trying to venture into this "outside world" business, THERE IS NO ESCAPE Your familiar green text be pleasin' to my eye.
Yeah... don't think I ever met anyone else on here who was :v
HOW DID YOU KNOW I'VE BEEN WATCHING YOU I feel for you, my wisdom teeth are having far too much fun causing me pain! Life is alright thanks, just finished first year at uni so it's all good c: stumbled upon this place again "by accident"...have been lurking for a few days haha[DOUBLEPOST=1374795080][/DOUBLEPOST] Running fridge is ringing bells...clearly you remember me better than myself
Ed!! :'D I feel loved, how ya doing man? ...I feel scared[DOUBLEPOST=1374794295][/DOUBLEPOST] Nice to see familiar faces c:
I managed about two years before I admitted defeat... Hmm I swear I recognise your name but you joined after I left Perhaps this will lighten your view of david tenant Spoiler :'D Hi c: have you had another name? I don't recognise it
Nobody ever leaves khv for good ....hi guiz c:
I'm afraid these days that event seems to be a rare occurance >< but you are of course, worthy of far greater things <3
Of course you are, lovely <3
Nomnomnom, wow, I'm so glad I signed on khv just to read this c: though I'm a paranoid person myself.. It was clever, very clever. I actually had to read it properly, rather than my usual cantering through a novel that requires very little brain power. For a while I was worried that it would be too boring, and the vocabulary would be ugly, but then you balanced the lexus out by using wonderful examples within the story such as the butterfly. I also found the example of the furry monster on the street corner quite amusing. xD I thought the concept of being able to see every moment of time, that of the past and what is to come, to be absolutely incredible, but already I can see how horrendous it would be. I guess we should all be grateful for our naivety, eh? Mundane lives are sometimes the best we can hope for. Good stuff. c:
what did we do to earn legendary? :v YAY IT'S COOL THOUGH <3 <3
haha shup, I know you haven't read it. MERRY CHRISTMAS INCASE I DON'T SEE YOU. god knows if Ill ever come back on this site
Good news: you can bring back chicks whenever you want. Bam-chika-wowow~
*firey and proud I like this. Very articulate description and you're clearly apt in your choice of vocabulary. The introduction felt personal as if your narrative is directly addressing the reader, which was an effective touch. I felt as if you brought this in too suddenly; it was just thrown onto the end of your descriptive paragraph. Some sort of transition into a flashback should be used. Italics could be particularly effective, as could seperating flashbacks from the main body of text, especially seperating the line "perhaps it was what happened to Jake and I..." Like this: "Perhaps it was what happened to Jake and me that ruined sunsets. I watched as the gnarled, contorted hands of the brush clawing at the sun's virgin hide, dragging it down into the bowels of the black earth..." Anyway, very good start overall, and nice title, I love a bit of french. Keep it up :3
I honestly quite enjoyed reading this, despite the fact I don't really consider it an essay. It seems to resemble a report or otherwise more than anything; an essay would have a more defined structure and would not contain such informal and personal references, such as the ones made to your family members. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this and strived to get your message across. I felt that you perhaps went on about Skillet for a bit too long and that your conclusion could have been a bit more concise, though I liked how you finished your work with a rhetorical question. Nice work, interesting. I'll certainly be looking out for christian moral messages when I see the movie this weekend.
